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Basically you are born with strange powers and get rejected by everyone, including your loved ones. People see us as a threat and try and hunt us down. We each retreat into the wild and grow up in the wilderness. We all want to know how we became this way. We each can have up to 3 special powers to start with. This story is set in Modern Times.

OK! time for the reference post
REFERENCE FOR "Call of Origin: Elemental Spirit"

Premise: Shans

Story and Ref Guide- Simeon

((As of now, this is incomplete... I'm kinda reading through this again to piece this plot together... and I still see a helluva lot of plot holes that need filling in... Bear with me... this is gonna get a whole lot more complex unless we give this story a definite direction... And that's what I'm going to do...))

>>>CONTENTS<<<

1- Story

2- Locales

3- Cast List (Soon to be expanded)
---3.1 Current/Original Cast
---3.2 The Nine

4- Common Enemy List

5- Element Spirit Classes

6- Lexicon

7- Frequently Asked Questions (FAQ)

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1-->>>STORY<<<

Synopsis: The Modern Era- Circa 2000-2010.

Deomas City. For 10 years, people with special powers have been persecuted... all of them no older than 25... They are called Elementals.

Hunted down, dehumanized, captured, and experimented on... They are almost less than animals, forced to flee to the forests of Wildwood for safety from the human society that once welcomed them with open arms...

But things are changing... Freedom fighters have gathered under a wise guardian against a madman seeking "Utopia" for the Elementals he persecutes and torments.

Another madman is also on the loose, terrorizing all sides, determined to terminate all who are weak and useless... or who ever gets in his way...

Out of this growing turmoil, a hero is found... struggling to come to terms with his shadows and step into the light...

2-->>>Locales<<<

Deomas City: A dangerous metropolis. Shadows are everywhere here... and fear is common.

Wildwood: The forests surrounding Deomas City.

Haven Forest: The deepest and most remote part of Wildwood. Former base of the freedom-fighter group known as "The Angels of Haven."

Mt. HavenCrest: Tallest mountain in the Haven Mountain Range.

Haven Catacombs: A cavern temple carved inside of Mt. Haven.
-- Cavern Foyer: Largest part of the Catacombs and the gathering room

Feral Human Studies Science Labs: The places of horrible experiments and torment of Elementals... There are 10 known FHSS Labs in and around Deomas City and Wildwood...
(4 in WildWood, 5 in Deomas City... and the Main Lab)

Lab Name/Designation - (Purpose) - Status

Wildwood 1 - (Harvesting/Experiment/Study) - Under Ragnarok's Control

Wildwood 2 - (Assimilation/Experiment/Study) - Destroyed

Wildwood 3 - (Training/Study) - Targeted

Wildwood 4 - (Ugrading/Study) - Destroyed

FHSS 1 - (Harvesting/Study) -

FHSS 2 - (Assimilation/Study) -

FHSS 3 - (Training) -

FHSS 4 - (Upgrade) - Destroyed

FHSS 5 - (Experimentation/Study)

FHSS HQ - (Omni) -




(More to be added)

3-->>>>> Cast (Will be expanded into bios and such later. Focus for now is Spirit/Abilities) <<<<<<

3.1
IN ORDER OF APPEARANCE


Name: Spirn
Status: Protagonist. Sleeping Spirit
Powers: ???, ???, DistanceTeleport, AngelDelGuardia, OnTheWings
Text colour:orange

Name: Nirak
Status: Antagonist. Being trained by Ragnarok
Powers: DarkClass, DistanceTeleport, DarkHeart, RaptorShift, OnTheWings,
Text colour:orange+italics

Age: 15
Appearance: White hoodie sweater, yellow T-shirt, black jeans and shoes. Black hair, brown eyes


Name: Mariko Shaunisa
Player: Shauni
Status: Original Cast. Dropped out.
Powers: Castform, PyroFist, TrueTongue
Text: purple


Name: Silver
Player: Silver
Status: Original Cast. In Play. Protagonist.
Powers: PyroForm, HighSpeed, Ignite, OrnithShift, ???
Text colour:gray

Age:13
Appearance: Green shirt and blue jeans, blonde hair, blue eyes. Silver Tech Armor


Name: Trik
Player: Matrix Kirby
Status: Original Cast. In Play. Main Protagonist (Hero)
Powers: ForceAmper, ItemChannel, MindReading, LightSword, SpiritSense, Holy Influence
Color: Blue/Italics

Age: 17
Appearance: White shirt, brown shoes and vest, blue jeans, brown hair, blue eyes.


Name: Opal
Player: Opal
Status: Original Cast. Dropped out.
Powers: ForcedStasis, OnTheWings
Text colour:red


Name: Simeon Avaenjis / Alpha Leo
Player: Simeon
Status: In Play. Protagonist. Leader of the "Angels of Haven" Freedom-Fighters aka "Archangel"
Powers: Invisibility, Illusion, Ghost, SpiritMimic, SpiritSense, EternalLeo, SpiritPurify, SpiritScan, OnTheWings, SoulSteal
Color: Teal

Age: 34
Appearance: Black furred Lion-morph in Steel Blue TechArmor


Name: Umbreos Feral/ Master Feral/ Boss Feral (There was a point where he was refered to as "VERAL" but that was a typo.)
Player: Currently an NPC. Played by Simeon
Status: In Play. Villain?
Powers: DarkClass, StatClass, ???
Text: Bold/Italic

Age: 50
Appearance: Black hair streaked with white and swept back, thin chinese mustache. Buisness suit. (kinda "Giovanni-ish")


Name: Dr. Ehnymous
Player: Currently an NPC.
Status: On and Off. Villain
Powers: None. Human.
Text: Italic


Name: Lance Dragoon
Player: Currently an NPC. Played by Simeon
Status: In Play. Support Character
Powers: HighSpeed, Levitation, SpiritIdentify, Draco-Shift
Text Color: #336699 ( it's hexidecimal! )

Age: 17
Appearance: Red hair and thin mustache and beard, green eyes. Silver Dragoon TechArmor


Name: Shadow
Player: Currently an NPC. Played by Silver
Status: In Play. Support Character
Powers: ShadowStep, Levitation, ShadOrb, Jet
TextColor: #442288

Age: 14
Appearance: Black hair, Lavender eyes and shirt, torn black jeans.


Name: Kayla
Player: Currently an NPC. Played by Shans
Status: On and Off. Support Character
Powers: LightClass, TimeCronos, DistanceTeleport, Telepathy, OnTheWings
Text Color: pink, deeppink

Age: 14
Appearance: Long Brown hair, Dark Purple Shirt, jeans, Dark Brown Eyes



Name: Krei
Player: Currently an NPC. Played by Matrix Kirby
Status: In Play. Support Character... Alignment Unknown
Powers: Invisibility, Jamming, SpiritMove, OrnithShift, ForceGaea
Text Color: #996699

Age: 16
Appearance: Other than usually being invisible, he usually wear blue jeans, blue shirt, and brown leather jacket. His hair is a spiky brown. He wears shades. Tarnished silver TechArmor



Name: Joshua Avaenjis / Omega Leo
Player: Currently an NPC. Played by Simeon
Status: In Play. Protagonist.
Powers: SpiritScan, LeoShift, ---ShadowStep, ShadOrb, Levitation, PyroForm, ShortTeleport, SpiritBlock, MindControl, HighSpeed
Text Color: teal/Italic

Age: technically 2-years-old, but he is physically 12-years-old.
Apperance: Tan-gold skin, jet-black hair, cinnamon eyes, blue swimming trunks. Dull crimson TechArmor


Name: Ziheu
Player: Currently an NPC. Played by Shans
Status: Off and on. Alignment Unknown.
Powers: OverShadow, Teleportation, Telepathy, SpiritBlock, Charge
Text Color: Dark Red

Age: 19
Apperance: Short Brown hair, dark brown eyes, Black leather jacket, Dark yellow shirt, Dark blue pants



Name: Ragnarok
Player: Matrix Kirby
Status: In Play. Villain
Powers: ForceAmper, DarkForce, DistanceTeleport, Levitation, MindControl, MindReading, HauntingSpirits
Text Color: Blue

Age: 24
Appearance: Black Cloak, hair and eyes. Blood Red TechArmor


Name: Pent Locket
Player: Imortal Servant
Status: Protagonist
Powers: Castform, Pyroform, StoneStrength
Text Color: Green

Age: 21
Appearance: He has short brown hair. He wears a black short sleeve shirt with dark blue denim pants.


Name: Rich Archer
Player: Currently an NPC. Shared by Silver and Simeon.
Status: TurnCoat. Protagonist
Powers: SummonClass
Text: Green-Underlined

Age: 13
Appearance: African. PineGreen TechArmor


Name: Louanne
Status: ??? (Not really decided yet)
Powers: Morph, MindReader, Healing
Text Color: Blue + italic + bold

Age: 14
Appearance: Waist-length blond hair; green eyes; wears the same stuff as in AROM: Secret of the Guardians (I'm feeling lazy), but with only one katana on her back, no bag, and no shuriken (I'll miss them. *cry*).


Name: Elise Epsilon
Player: NPC.
Status: Helping Silver.
Powers: PsyClass
Text: Underlined+Purple

Age: 16
Appearance: Blonde haired, blue eyed. Wearing purple on black armor.

3.2
THE NINE (Antagonists/ Villains) Feral's most loyal Tech Elementals... Each member guards a FHSS Lab. Appearances WILL VARY as "The Nine" is a new story element...

Leader: Delta
Gender: Female
Dominant Spirit Class: Angel

2ndInCommand: Mage
Gender: Male
Dominant Spirit Class: ForceClass

Member: Sigma
Gender: Male
Dominant Spirit Class: Demon ---- Defeated....?

Member: Epsilon
Gender: Female
Dominant Spirit Class: Psychic ---- Converted. Aiding Silver

Member: Berserker
Gender: Male
Dominant Spirit Class: Shift

Member: Ninja
Gender: Female
Dominant Spirit Class: ForceChaos ------- Deceased

Member: Archer
Gender: Male
Dominant Spirit Class: Summon ---- Converted. Aiding Silver.

Member: Theif
Gender: Female
Dominant Spirit Class: Darkness

Member: Ohm
Gender: Male
Dominant Spirit Class: Altered

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>>> COMMON ENEMY/ BADDIES LIST <<<

>>Humans<<

Guards - Low level Grunt working for Feral. These guys aren't very bright, obviously...

FHSS Scientist - Low level Scientist.. all answer to both Feral and Dr. Ehnymous

ECT Member - Elemental Capture Team Member. Elite Guards with better equipment and MUCH more cunning.

TempElemental - Guards trained to use Spirit Orbs WITHOUT turning into Elementals. Holding orbs in order to use powers.


>>Elemental<<

LabRat - Obedient to their Masters... Will do anything to be free from torture...

Acolytes - Loyal to their Masters, they are adept at their powers... but are about as intelligent as a common Guard...

Honor Guard - Are just a step away from being promoted to Tech Elemental... like Acolytes.. but much more intelligent.


>>Tech Elemental<<

Page - Look like Clone Troopers with Spears. Only designated by a lettered barcode... (ex. - JKYLNHYD-40)

Squire - Armor slightly tweaked for each individual. Allowed weapons of choice.


>>Ragnarok's Minions<<

Name: Obsidian
Status: Deceased
Powers: Blind, Weaken, Slowdown, PoisonSoul, MindDrain
Purpose: Weakening Opponents and going in for the kill.
Weakness: If he can't weaken opponent, he is fairly weak himself otherwise.
Text: darkblue

Name: Pumice
Status: Deceased
Powers: HighSpeed, Strengthen, SpeedUp, Faith, Wrath
Purpose: Power himself up to beat opponents down with power
Weakness: Power ups are only temporary, and has a time limit before he can use them again.
Text: darkblue, underlined

Name: Granite
Status: Alive, Hunting
Powers: OverShadow, TotalPossession, MindGame, Persuasion&Lies, Puppetmaster
Purpose: Using other's mind against them
Weakness: Can lose concentration easily, and lost concentration means he loses control.
Text: darkblue, bold

Name: Scoria
Status: Deceased (Soul was ripped out)
Powers: Tsunami, FrigidWind, Lightning, Ignite, Constriction
Purpose: Using Spell-type elements to dominate his opponent.
Weakness: Most like a Basic Element, his spells are pathetic if they don't hit.
Text: darkblue, italic

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5--- >>> SPIRIT CLASS LIST <<<

Note: MOST Elementals can only have up to 10 or 12 Element Spirits inhabiting them at a time safely... Some have 15... the most documented was 25... ((Please.. let all try to keep it to at least 15 each... anymore would be god-moding unless we decide it's part of the story... Which might be in Joshua's case...)) Anymore could weaken an Elemental considerably... However... there are rumors that there are rare Elementals who can retain as many powers they wish... but it IS just a rumor.

Note2: Any move the ends with "Class" means it counts as one spirit. (ex. - PsyClass, ForceClass)

Note 3 : To determine what Spirit Class your Character is... look up his or her moves in this List. The Class with most of your Moves/Spirits/ Abilities is the Class of your character.

Note 4: The Classes are NOT here to emphasise weaknesses. They are to classsify certain attributes of each spirit... ^^;;

STATUS CLASS
(Affected must be in contact with user for these to take effect...)

Healing - Can heal self and anyone else
HighSpeed - Can run at blinding speed to the point of being invisible. Problem... no brakes.
ForcedStasis - Affected freeze in place and their minds blackout
Stun - Brings affected close to unconscious
Paralyze - Prevents affected from moving
Blind - Temporarily make affected blind
Weaken - drains strength from affected
Strengthen - restores strength to affected
Slowdown - slows affected down
Speedup - speeds affected up
Awareness - Awakens and makes alert
Sleep - puts affected asleep

StatClass - All Status Moves

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ANGEL CLASS

Wing - Fly without wings
Judgement - Manipulate Light and Darkness
Redemption - Desperation Move
Prayer - Reveals Weaknesses
Faith - Increases accuracy
Wrath - Increases Strength
FireFromHeaven - (Literally)
Invitation - Seems to weaken, but is gathering strength
Reach - Increases Range (Projectile and Force attacks)
Forgiveness - Heals affected
DivineIntervention- ForceField
HolyInfluence- Manipulates All offensive projectile attacks

AngelClass - All Angel Attacks
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LIGHT CLASS

Charge - Manipulate Energy and Light
HoloManipulation - Can create holograms and activate hologram-related objects
EnergySolidify - Turns energy into matter and vice versa
LightArmor - Armor made of Energy and Light
LightSword - Sword made of Light and Energy
Laser - Projectile
Flash - Blinds opponent
Impact - Light Blast. Smilar to ShadOrb
LightStep - Can hide in the light

LightClass - All Light Attacks

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DEMON CLASS

OverShadow - Can temporarily take over a body
TotalPossession - Takes a body and takes the mind
MindGame - Projectile. If one is hit, mind is vulnerable.
Persuasion&Lies - Used in combo with MindGame. Weakens mind to point of submission.
PoisonSoul - Drains Mental Strength
SubtleBackstab - Fake out Projectile. If successful, it hits you from behind, leaving you vulnerable
PuppetMaster - Can control more than one body a once
HauntingSpirits - Summon Kamikaze Spirits from the Beyond to do small amounts of damage

DemonClass - All Demon Moves
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DARKNESS CLASS

DarkCharge - Like Charge.. but handles Darkness...
DarkStrength
DarkBolt
DarkThunder
DarkForce
DarkClaymore- Like LightSword... only Dark.
BecomeShadow - Fade into the shadows

DarkClass - All Darkness moves
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SHIFT CLASS

Castform - Turn into any animal or person that you've touched...
Morph - Turn into any animal you've seen or wish...
OnTheWings - Sprout wings
LeoShift - Lion-morph
LupiShift - Wolf-morph
RaptorShift - Velociraptor-morph
OrnithShift - Eagle/Falcon-morph
DracoShift - Dragon-morph

ShiftClass - All Shift Moves
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FORCE CLASS (Earth, Water, Ice, Lighining, Fire, Shadow, Stone, Forest, Time)
(OBVIOUSLY the most diverse class. It's diverse enough to have it's own sub-classes...)


ForceGaea (Earth) - All Earth Moves
GaeaPillar - Pillar rises from the earth
Fissure - Earth Splits open
GaeaBarrier - A wall of Earth
GaeaSwallow - Earth opens to swallow enemy...

ForceAqua (Water) - All Water Moves
Splash
Spray
Jet
WaterBlast
Tsunami

ForceFrigi (Ice) - All Ice Moves
IceSpike - BIG Icicle
IceSlash - Breakable Icesword
Blizzard - (DUH)
FrigidWind - (DUH)

ForceAmper (Lightning) - All Lightning Moves
Spark
Shock
Thunder
Bolt
Lightning
WeakPowerSurge - Powerful field of electric energy

ForcePyro (Fire) - All Fire Moves
PyroFist - Manipulate fire
PyroForm - Engulf Hands ( or entire body ) in fire (( WHOO, HUMAN TORCH.))
Fireball - Throw FireBalls
Ignite - Can set anything ablaze with a single touch...


ForceChaos (Shadow) - All Shadow Moves
ShadowStep - can become invisible in another object's shadow...
ShadOrb - Like Impact
Invisibility - Can become invisible
Ghost - Can phase through walls

ForcePetra (Stone) - All Stone Moves
Avalanche - A wave of stones
StoneStrength - become strong as stone... and can lift and throw HEAVY boulders
CommandPebbles - make pebbles fly at opponent
CommandStones - make stones and pebbles fly at opponent
CommandBoulders - make boulders, stones, AND pebbles fly at opponent

ForceFlorr (Forest) - All Forest Moves
Vine - Vines grow rapidly anywhere, everywhere...
PoisonIvy - Like vines... but torurously itchy...
VenusFlyTrap - GIANT venus fly trap grows and attacks
Constriction -projectile. Big honking vine is thrown like a rope and it starts moving on it's own... sqeezing the life out of the affected.

ForceCronos (Time) - All Time Moves
TimePush - Slows down Time
TimeSlip - Speeds up time

ForceClass- All Force Moves

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PSYCHIC CLASS

ShortTeleport - Teleport short distances
DistanceTeleport - Teleport anywhere...
Telepathy - mental communication
Sync - User and affected share the same mind...
TrueTongue - Can sense the intentions and hear the words of the world around the user
Illusion - Can create convincing illusions of anything
Levitation - can float in midair
Jamming - can block scanners
MindControl - Can control the mind of anyone affected
MindDrain - Can steal memories
MindReading - Can hear what people are thinking

PsyClass - All Psyshic moves

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SPIRIT CLASS

PastSpirit - Can mentally re-live the past of anyone
SpiritMimic - Copies all the powers of any Elemental user touches. Powers stay for a few days.
SpiritPurify - Tames Altered Spirits and frees affected from all forms of mindcontrol and mental poisoning.
DarkHeart - basically the opposite to SpiritPurify
SpiritScan - Copies any power seen. The copy is permanent
SpiritSense - Can sense things most cannot... and can detect Elementals
SpiritIdentify - Can Identify Class and Name of an Element Spirit...
SpiritMove - Can transfer Element Spirits from one body to another... Can transfer (or remove), Souls too...
SoulSteal - lower rank ability of SpiritMove
SpiritBlock - Neutralizes ALL Element Spirit Abilities ... TEMPORARILY


SpiritClass - All Spirit Moves
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SUMMON CLASS
(Utilitarian class. Must be very experienced to be a warrior with this as a dominant class...)

ItemChannel - Channel Power into held item
ItemSummon - Create any item needed out of thin air, or call up an item in inventory...
SummonClone - Creates a "Dust Dummy" of user.
SummonBeast - Creates a "Dust Dummy" of animal of choice
SummonArmor - User is immediatley clad in aromor of choice
SummonWeapon - Creates ay weapon of choice

SummonClass - All Summons
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??? (ALTERED) CLASS
((No one knows what these do and IF they can be mastered... but they are thought to be immensely powerful.))

PaxAnteDeluvian (Calm before the Storm) -
DeusExMachina
ImprobbableOdds
Immortality
EternalLeo - ... A latent power slowly awakening...
Armageddon - Our Doom ( MWAHAHAH! )
AngelDelGuarda - Summons all energy in users body to protect loved one, user is left in an unconcious state.

Omnipotence - (Self-Explanitory)
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6->>LEXICON<<

HighSpeed - Those with HighSpeed
Teleporter - A teleporter
Lumins - With light powers
Pyrans - those with fire powers
Shifters - those who can shapeshift
Angels - With Angel class abilities
Demons -With Demon calss abilities
Espers - With Psychic class powers
Gaeans - with Earth powers
Aerials - those who can fly
Summoners - those with summon class moves
ShadowSteppers - THose with Shadowstep
Invisibles- Those with Invisibility
Chaotic- ForceChaos powers user
Krons- those with ForceChronos powers
Shades - Those with Darkness class
Statics- Those with Stat class powers
Hydrans- Those with ForceAqua powers
Arctics- Those with Force Fridgi powers
Rocks- Those with ForcePetra powers
Thunders - Those with ForceAmper powers
Florans- Those with ForceFlorr powers
Jammer- has Jamming ability
Spirt- Spirit Class user

(might add more...)

Havenites - Members of the "Angels of Haven"

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7- >>>(FAQ)<<<

1)
Q: If you master all of the abilties in one class, does it count as one?
A: Yes. But you can only Master three Classes at a time... The Force Class is an exception considering it has several sub-classes...

2)
Q: Can abilities get developed? (e.g.- ShortTeleport--->DistanceTeleport)
A: Yes. No explanation.

3)
Q: Is it that we can only have one ability with "class" in its name?
A: ... No... Look at Ragnarok. He has already mastered three classes... (which happens to be the maximum one Elemental can master)

4)
Q: Can you use two or more Spirits/Powers at the same time?
A: Yes.
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Name: Mariko Shaunisa
Age: 20
Gender: Female
Appearance: Long Brown Hair bound losely with a ribben, Short sleaved baby blue top, navy denim pants and a belt. Has belonging tied to her person such as key rings and chains. Anything she has found that she wanted to keep as jewerly (cos there isnt a large selction out here)

Powers:
Castform: Can transfom into any animal she has touched
Piro Fist: Can manipulate fire, but not start a fire (carrys a lighter)
True Tongue: Can hear the thoughts of the forest around her.
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Name: Silver
Age: 13
Gender: Male
Appearance: Blonde hair, blue eyes, green T-shirt and jeans
Powers: He can create fire from his hands (Like, set them on fire. It's cool.)... and run really fast. Like, REALLY fast. There is a third one, but he doesn't know about it yet...
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Name: Trik
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Appearance: Always seen with a robe. He refuses to take it off. His hair is long and black, his eyes are as black as night. Other than that, his features include the average human male's features.
Powers:
Lightning: He has power over Lightning itself. Able to call it from the sky or from his hands.
Item Channeling: He can channel his magic through any items he's carrying.
???: An unknown power... of great destruction...
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((Interesting setup. I won't join right now but I may show up later on... :suspicious: ))
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(ok, I am So into this!)

Name: Opal
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Appearance: Purple hair tied into a ponytail with a back shirt that was orange writing, and a black sweatshirt over it. Green cat eyes, blue jeans with a maroon belt. Around her neck is a neckless with a picture of her family (mom/dad/her)
Powers: freeze things for a short period of time and can sprout wings to fly.
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<span style='color:red'>~Chapter 1: The Children~</span>

(Ok, I'll start now, anyone can join during the storyline. Here's my character intro)

Happy Birthday!

<span style='color:orange'>"Hey, thanks family."</span>

*Spirn was a boy of only 8 years and it was his birthday, though this is a day that he would never forget for the rest of his life*

"Hi, Spirn! Are you ready for a fun filled day?"

<span style='color:orange'>"You bet I am!"</span>

*They were about to leave when something caught everybody?s eye*

"Oh great. The police are still out there looking for those freaks"

*Spirn had known about this freak hunt for a long while. The big problem was that he was just like them, the secret that could change his life. He had several powers over energy including creating it but he didn?t use them. Even when his family and friends were going to die, he could let out his secret. The government thought of people like him as dangerous, but that day he was caught. *

<span style='color:orange'>"Hey, at least we can still go to the amusement park."</span>

"Sad fact, it?s closed."

*They decided to go watch a movie instead. While they were driving the police stopped them*

"Have you been checked yet?"

"Checked for what?"

"We can't risk letting one of them freaks trough here. It?s a public place, what would happen if one of them destroyed the place, and millions died? Now out of the car!"

*The police used a device to sense sign of strange powers, thoughts when through Spirn head as his whole family and friends were checked*

"OK kid... it?s your turn"

*The device scanned him and unusual power readings appeared on the machines LCD*

<span style='color:orange'> "Mum... help me!" </span>

*Spirn yelled at the top of his voice, but his family didn?t listen*

<span style='color:orange'>AAAAAAGGGGGGHHHH</span>

*Spirn?s Eyes lit up and energy surrounded him*

We knew this would happen... Quick! His powers are undeveloped! catch him!

*Spirn tried to run as fast as he could*

<span style='color:orange'>"You won?t catch me!"</span>

*The landscape change and the city went into forest, When they reached the forest Spirn disappeared*

"Oh well. That kid won?t be bothering us anymore"

*As the police force left and deep feeling cut into his thoughts like a blade. He started to cry*

<span style='color:orange'>"I guess, I?ll have to go it alone now"</span>

*7 years later*

<span style='color:orange'>"Another birthday, another year alone, can?t even remember how to get to the city. Well, this is when I get back!"</span>
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(ok, sorry, but I have to step in here. Will it kill you to you something called puncuation? like " "'s and crap like that?)
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(Sorry -_- ! I didn't Really check that stuff. I'll try next time.)
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(It's ok, I have a cold so anything can make me snappy V_V and you won't try, you will! ^_^)

Opal leaned in a tree, watching the cars go by. A Robin landed above her head, and started to sing

<span style='color:red'>"Pfft, birds, they think they're SO hot." Opal snuffed as she let her palm out and the singing stopped.</span>

Shutting her eyes to catch some z's, Opal dreamed about how her life was before she was on the run. Simple. Decent. Home. Those three things are now summed up to a picture in her neckless. Rubbing the charm, she let out a sigh of relief. Opening a crack, she could see a boy not too far from her. Keeping quiet, she tucked her legs in to try to remember where she saw him before. In the past.
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*He walked around the forest and leaned against the tree. In the distance he saw girl about his age*

<span style='color:orange'>Where have I seen her before, in my old life?</span>

*He walked up to the girl*

<span style='color:orange'>Hi, do I know you</span>

<span style='color:red'>I don?t know</span>

*As this happened a ball of energy formed in front of him. He wasn?t in control of what was happening but it happened*

<span style='color:orange'>You know my secret now, go on, call the police, and get your reward</span>

*As he said this the energy ball retreated into his body*

<span style='color:orange'>I wonder, why did this happen?</span>
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((Ugh, like Opal said, use some punctuation, man! What did commas, quotes, periods and question marks ever do to you? It makes your posts so much easier to understand...))

<span style='color:gray'>"Another one, huh?" </span>Silver interupted, sitting on the branch of a tree not too far from Opal and Spirn. <span style='color:gray'>"You're not the only freak around he-" </span>he started, but fell of his branch and landed face-first on the ground <span style='color:gray'>"-re"</span> he finished with a mouth full of dirt.
"Irregardless" and "Over exaggerated" are NEVER CORRECT EVER because they are redundant
Regardless means "without regard", and adding "ir" on the front actually makes it a double negative; exaggerate means "to overstate" so you're literally saying "over overstate."
Example: I can not exaggerate the importance of this fact enough, regardless of how often people ignore it.
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*Trik was leaning against another nearby tree... His eyes were close. He shook his head...*

<span style='color:blue'>"*sigh* There goes the neighborhood..."</span>

*He turned his head slightly, opening just one eye, to catch a glimpse of the other 3*

<span style='color:blue'>"Hmph... Pathetic..."</span>
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<span style='color:orange'>"Hey I heard that." </span> said Spirn pointing his glowing finger at Trik, then he stopped.
<span style='color:orange'>"Wait, did you say you're a freak too?"</span> said Spirn with a puzzled look on his face.
<span style='color:gray'>"Well I was getting to that."</span> Silver said picking himself of the ground.
<span style='color:orange'>"Well well well..."</span> He said looking at Silver.
<span style='color:orange'>"What did you get kick out for, huh?"</span> He asked Silver.

(Opal, when you said your power is to freeze things did you mean Time freeze or Ice freeze? I fixed the "" problem. ok?)
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"Quickly! Theres a fire at the plaza! One of the freaks started it!"
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<span style='color:purple'>"Mommy! Mommy! Where are you???"</span>
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"Mariko run! They know about us! Run to the forest!"
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<span style='color:purple'>"Mommy! I wont leave you!"</span>
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"there! Theres the woman! Get her!"
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"Mariko run now! Mommy will be fine!"
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<span style='color:purple'>"But you hurt!"</span>
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"Mariko run!"
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"Get her!"
................bang..............
"Mar......iko...."
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<span style='color:purple'>"Mommy!!!!"</span>
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"There! Theres another one!"
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"A kid?"
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"Doesn't matter! get the freak!"
..............bang...........
<span style='color:purple'>"Ahh!"</span>
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"Shes getting away!"
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"She wont get far! I got her in the leg"
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<span style='color:purple'>"Mommy....."</span>
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Mariko's eyes burst open
<span style='color:purple'>"Ahh.....no....not that nightmare again......"</span>
Mariko looked down from her perch up the tree, she was at present a hawk. She saw the group of people below her
<span style='color:purple'>"Odd...."</span>
Mariko pondered the group of people below her, weather or not she should decent from her vantage point.
Strange, she thought that so many should come together in one place at one time, it wasn't like them at all....
The Hawk lent forward and glared at these people, they where like her, they had powers...but did she want to risk it all....when she had lived so long without others...
The hawk flew down to a lower branch, so she could hear what was being said.
<span style='color:purple'>*typical* she thought *there all in the same boat yet they insist on arguing already...freaks calling freaks indeed...what irony*</span>
The hawk turned to fly away
<span style='color:purple'>*I dont need people, I have the forest*</span>
The hawk was about to launch when she heard the forest whisper to her
<span style='color:purple'>*I take it you want me to stop then....fine...I'll watch them for a little longer...its not like a hawk is unusual...lets see what they do before I reveal myself*</span>
"BOW BEFORE THE SHAUNINESS THAT IS SHAUNI! "--Shadowman

"Shauni fell down a drainage ditch and died. That was the end of her pokemon journey. "--Shauni


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