Okay, if your wondering what's up with the spoilers tag, when this is all done, it will indeed, be a comic. I plan for this all to be 250 episodes, and if you rather find out what happens when I launchthe comic, turn back. But if you like spoilers, read away.
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Just read it (sorry it tooks so long). Overall it's not that bad but the whole things feels a but cliche. Personally I'd use less corny names for the characters and maybe make the plot a bit deeper than just 'creatures get super powers and use them to fight bad guys who are trying to get power up'. There's nothing wrong with that basic plot but it's been done before so some twists would be nice.
Nonono, that's just the beginning. It gets muuuuch deeper. That was like an introduction. I have the second chapter almost done on my computer. Also, what about the part where Pounce founds out she was gotten pregnant by her brother?
Brother?!? Dude, that's just messed up. You really should change it. As for things getting deeper later, if people aren't interested in the beginning they're not going to be reading when it gets more interesting.
That's still wrong... And, as I said before, you need people to still be reading by 106. You should at least consider changing some of the names to something a bit less obvious...
