Evil Plan!
Evil Plan follows the adventures of Alice, who finds herself out of a job as of the first comic... and so she seeks employment in as the henchmen of the local mad scientist bent on world domination. It's the classic Super Hero vs. Super Villain story, told from the opposite side... and it's much more funny that way.
The story is developping slowly, but it's got potential. The characters aren't particularly deep but they're perfectly loveable. Art is... passable. Very comicy, and in color, but there are frequent and obvious anatomical errors so I can't say it's great. In the end, it looks ok, and definitely improves later on.
Favorite pages include this one and this one. It's for simple jokes like those that I continue to love this comic...
EDIT: Some pages were added in the beginning and my first favorite was removed, but I believe I had listed this joke there. I would also like to throw this up here, which I didn't catch the first time I read this.
Evil Plan
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Silver
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Evil Plan
"Irregardless" and "Over exaggerated" are NEVER CORRECT EVER because they are redundant
Regardless means "without regard", and adding "ir" on the front actually makes it a double negative; exaggerate means "to overstate" so you're literally saying "over overstate."
Example: I can not exaggerate the importance of this fact enough, regardless of how often people ignore it.
Regardless means "without regard", and adding "ir" on the front actually makes it a double negative; exaggerate means "to overstate" so you're literally saying "over overstate."
Example: I can not exaggerate the importance of this fact enough, regardless of how often people ignore it.
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Re: Evil Plan
This is pretty great! the art style is more consistent in size compared to comics I draw by hand, on paper. plus, This is just plain hilarious!
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Re: Evil Plan
Nifty setup, it's not often you follow a super villian's point of view. There are definately some annoying anatomy problems at times but the comics is consistantly amusing, and that's what's really matters. I can't say any strips stuck out as my favorites, per say, but nearly all of them were at least somewhat funny.
Re: Evil Plan
Great comic, Silver. I like the originality of the story's premise, and how it explains the workings of running an evil lair (such as how villans actually get people to work for them, and why they're usually stupid). You've all already covered the anatomy, so I'm not going to elaborate.
It's funny to be rooting for the evil side for once.
It's funny to be rooting for the evil side for once.
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Re: Evil Plan
I actually read through the whole archive the day this was posted up. I was just too lazy to post. 
I think it's a great comic. Clever plotline, and I like the art.
Some of my favorites would have to be this this and this. Oh, and this one because of the awesome The Scream reference.
I think it's a great comic. Clever plotline, and I like the art.
Some of my favorites would have to be this this and this. Oh, and this one because of the awesome The Scream reference.
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"To love another person is to see the face of God." ~ Victor Hugo
"Beyond this place of wrath and tears
Looms but the Horror of the shade,
And yet the menace of the years
Finds and shall find me unafraid." ~ William Ernest Henley
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I liked it. It had comedy. It wasn't art oriented. And I would do this to my customers if I had any. Also, I would do this if I had minions.
Hmm... This signature just got really short...
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Blastitar♂ (Water) Attacks: Bite, Water Gun, Crunch, Rock Slide (Wins 15, Losses 0) Torrent&Shed Skin
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