Mafia
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Astral Omega
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If you think THAT was nasty... Mwahahaa!
Night had fallen again in Pebbleversionia and Marley was sleeping.
His window opened a tiny crack seemingly by itself. There was a glint in the moonlight on scales as the snake slipped through silently.
The Black Mamba smelled the air with its tongue and moved towards its target. Up the bedpost it climbed, insinuating itself under the sheets. It found a foot and wrapped itself around the ankle.
Marley twitched, in his sleep, trying to remove the unseen annoyance.
The snake hissed, annoyed at the movements and opened its mouth- showing the dripping fangs and the black interior of its mouth. It sunk its teeth into the ankle, releasing 400mg of venom into Marley’s bloodstream. This was enough venom to kill an adult about 40 times over.
Marley sat up as pain blossomed on the point of entry. The neurotoxin soon got to work, hitting the nervous system and causing Marley’s mouth and fingers to begin tingling. His eyelids began to droop. His vision doubled and blurred.
The venom found its way through his various systems, causing many nasty things to occur, ending in paralysis and finally…
A piece of paper fluttered in through the window on the night breeze as the snake left through the opening. It fell gracefully to the floor, showing the chilling text on it:
"Take out Marley. The standard Mafia way.”
There was some evil laughter as Marley Died.
((This is the third revision of this scene. First of all it was just an unspecified snake bites him, then I decided it should be a Black Mamba- because that’s just really evil and that’s what the Mafia does- so I wrote a REALLY graphic version.
Unfortunately, the one where I did research and made it more realistic was almost squicking even ME while I was writing it- seriously it is GRAPHIC! If you’d like to see that version, tell me and I’ll PM you…
No offence meant to Marley by the fact that I wrote one of the squickiest scenes ever involving his death; I actually come up with the scene before I learned whom was to die.))
So it was obviously the Mafia… But who exactly IS the Mafia..?
Night had fallen again in Pebbleversionia and Marley was sleeping.
His window opened a tiny crack seemingly by itself. There was a glint in the moonlight on scales as the snake slipped through silently.
The Black Mamba smelled the air with its tongue and moved towards its target. Up the bedpost it climbed, insinuating itself under the sheets. It found a foot and wrapped itself around the ankle.
Marley twitched, in his sleep, trying to remove the unseen annoyance.
The snake hissed, annoyed at the movements and opened its mouth- showing the dripping fangs and the black interior of its mouth. It sunk its teeth into the ankle, releasing 400mg of venom into Marley’s bloodstream. This was enough venom to kill an adult about 40 times over.
Marley sat up as pain blossomed on the point of entry. The neurotoxin soon got to work, hitting the nervous system and causing Marley’s mouth and fingers to begin tingling. His eyelids began to droop. His vision doubled and blurred.
The venom found its way through his various systems, causing many nasty things to occur, ending in paralysis and finally…
A piece of paper fluttered in through the window on the night breeze as the snake left through the opening. It fell gracefully to the floor, showing the chilling text on it:
"Take out Marley. The standard Mafia way.”
There was some evil laughter as Marley Died.
((This is the third revision of this scene. First of all it was just an unspecified snake bites him, then I decided it should be a Black Mamba- because that’s just really evil and that’s what the Mafia does- so I wrote a REALLY graphic version.
Unfortunately, the one where I did research and made it more realistic was almost squicking even ME while I was writing it- seriously it is GRAPHIC! If you’d like to see that version, tell me and I’ll PM you…
No offence meant to Marley by the fact that I wrote one of the squickiest scenes ever involving his death; I actually come up with the scene before I learned whom was to die.))
So it was obviously the Mafia… But who exactly IS the Mafia..?
AWESOME!
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Saber Knight
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Gawd, I am loving this narrating!
Remind's me of when my sister's friend's second cousin (I actually think it's a bit more distant than second cousin) narrated. She did such an awesome job, and you never knew who was going to die until the end because she encorperated most people into the story.
So...back to haunting. Fun stuff, haunitng.
Boo! Did I scare you now?
Remind's me of when my sister's friend's second cousin (I actually think it's a bit more distant than second cousin) narrated. She did such an awesome job, and you never knew who was going to die until the end because she encorperated most people into the story.
So...back to haunting. Fun stuff, haunitng.
Boo! Did I scare you now?
May the Triforce be with you.
"To love another person is to see the face of God." ~ Victor Hugo
"Beyond this place of wrath and tears
Looms but the Horror of the shade,
And yet the menace of the years
Finds and shall find me unafraid." ~ William Ernest Henley
"To love another person is to see the face of God." ~ Victor Hugo
"Beyond this place of wrath and tears
Looms but the Horror of the shade,
And yet the menace of the years
Finds and shall find me unafraid." ~ William Ernest Henley
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PoikSpirit
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What's this Celebifly? Pleased to hear that no one suspects you? Willing to vote with the crowd now you threw them off? And what's with this voting of Marley randomly then... Marley dieing *gasp*... What? No one else gasped? A group gasp sounds really done when done by one person ya know.
Digging back. The first person Marley voted for: Silver! Now Silver knew it'd be too obvious to kill Marley immediately, or vote for him then kill him, or anything, until now. When the attention span of this group fades. Ah but I saw threw-Oooh a chicken, what was I saying?
Oh yes, then there could be Terra, pretending to be sickened by the mafia's actions to draw attention to her innocence subconsciously. What a ploy! And you've been jumping the bandwagon in both games, a mafi-ish trait to keep a stream of votes going away from themselves!
And Cheezy who voted me first round randomly whom I returned favor second round
. But seriously, he's always too quick to make random accusations, and jump the bandwagon, and end a round.
And, ever the top of my suspect list, that Poik kid. Being all hyper on caffiene after band camp and writing tons of junk which is going to annoy people. I would be suspect of his split personality though, but I've met him and he's quite nice.
With nothing more to go on, I vote for... no one just yet.
Digging back. The first person Marley voted for: Silver! Now Silver knew it'd be too obvious to kill Marley immediately, or vote for him then kill him, or anything, until now. When the attention span of this group fades. Ah but I saw threw-Oooh a chicken, what was I saying?
Oh yes, then there could be Terra, pretending to be sickened by the mafia's actions to draw attention to her innocence subconsciously. What a ploy! And you've been jumping the bandwagon in both games, a mafi-ish trait to keep a stream of votes going away from themselves!
And Cheezy who voted me first round randomly whom I returned favor second round
. But seriously, he's always too quick to make random accusations, and jump the bandwagon, and end a round.Oh, but then there's Luke agreeing with random accusations with no explanation, and pretending to be abhorred and scared witless of these incredulous crimes.Cheezdude wrote:Majority rules.
And, ever the top of my suspect list, that Poik kid. Being all hyper on caffiene after band camp and writing tons of junk which is going to annoy people. I would be suspect of his split personality though, but I've met him and he's quite nice.
With nothing more to go on, I vote for... no one just yet.
Hmm... This signature just got really short...
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PoikSpirit
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With a snake like that you wouldn't touch it no matter what. Unless you say Crikey too much.
What I'm trying to say is, you don't have to touch one (or in theory get anywhere near one) to set it loose in a room. Yay technology.
Yes, it would be too obvious. That's why the mafia set you up! Or is that what the mafia wants you to think?
What I'm trying to say is, you don't have to touch one (or in theory get anywhere near one) to set it loose in a room. Yay technology.
Yes, it would be too obvious. That's why the mafia set you up! Or is that what the mafia wants you to think?
Hmm... This signature just got really short...
Blastitar♂ (Water) Attacks: Bite, Water Gun, Crunch, Rock Slide (Wins 15, Losses 0) Torrent&Shed Skin
Sandiyama♂ (Ground, Fighting) Tackle, Vital Throw, Swift, Arm Thrust (Wins 8, Losses 0) Guts&Sand Veil
Swalectrode (Electric, Poison) Attacks: Yawn, Tackle, Sludge, Screech (Wins 5, Losses 0) Exp:30 Static&Liquid Ooze Status: Lost T.T
Blastitar♂ (Water) Attacks: Bite, Water Gun, Crunch, Rock Slide (Wins 15, Losses 0) Torrent&Shed Skin
Sandiyama♂ (Ground, Fighting) Tackle, Vital Throw, Swift, Arm Thrust (Wins 8, Losses 0) Guts&Sand Veil
Swalectrode (Electric, Poison) Attacks: Yawn, Tackle, Sludge, Screech (Wins 5, Losses 0) Exp:30 Static&Liquid Ooze Status: Lost T.T