Call of Origin: Elemental Spirit Discussion Thread
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Silver
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In AP English. And FUNimation One Piece. I'll post when I get the chance... I just haven't had a chance yet.
"Irregardless" and "Over exaggerated" are NEVER CORRECT EVER because they are redundant
Regardless means "without regard", and adding "ir" on the front actually makes it a double negative; exaggerate means "to overstate" so you're literally saying "over overstate."
Example: I can not exaggerate the importance of this fact enough, regardless of how often people ignore it.
Regardless means "without regard", and adding "ir" on the front actually makes it a double negative; exaggerate means "to overstate" so you're literally saying "over overstate."
Example: I can not exaggerate the importance of this fact enough, regardless of how often people ignore it.
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Prancing Mad
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I finally added in Israfel's biography and made two new characters as well. I even added alignments to all three of them. Here are the two new ones:
Name: Rem
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Alignment: ???
Powers:
AngerFire - Blasts of fire.
HappyHealing - Powerful group healing, does not discriminate between enemies and friends.
EnvyTrap - Green energy encircles foes or whoever he is envious of.
WaveOfDespair - Darkness flares out, hurting people's souls and making them despair.
Text Color: Italic Red
Personality: Rem is usually a good natured child, though his emotions are sometimes rather unpredictable.
Appearance: He is skinny with slightly jutting hip bones and golden tanned skin. His hair is blue black, the color of midnight. He has eyes the color of pure emerald. His clothing is a simple pair of dark denim jeans that are slightly baggy on his small frame, an oversized red tshirt with the sleeves coming unraveled, and a pair of comfortable sneakers.
Biography: Rem was nothing but a stray elemental... until he met Krei purely by a whim of fate. He never liked large crowds since his unstable emotions triggered his powers. But he is always calm and collected around Krei and the two are practically siamese twins connected at the hip.
Name: Dirge
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Alignment: Evil
Powers:
DarkCharge - Manipulates Darkness.
BecomeShadow - Fade into the shadows.
ForceChaos (Shadow) - All shadow moves.
ShadowStep - Fade into another's shadow.
ShadOrb - Shadow blast.
Ghost - Phase through walls.
Invisibility - Become invisible.
Text Color: Bold Red
Personality: Dirge is often very quiet and withdrawn, silently resigned.
Appearance: Dirge is tall and almost emaciated, with translucent skin like that of a ghost. Hair the color of a raven's feathers rests atop his head, spilling down into eyes that are the color of the core of a sapphire, dark and depthless. Dark smudges of black eyeliner shadow around those eyes. He wears a black hoodie over a dark blue tshirt, simple blue jeans, and a pair of black converse.
Biography: Dirge was nothing but a lost soul wandering through the world, until he ended up on Ragnarok's doorstep. He was taken in and given a place that he could sometimes refer to as his home, though it mostly felt like a prison. Somewhere deep in his heart, he knew that he was not meant for evil but the powers that lurked within him always seemed to convince him otherwise.
Israfel's Biography: Trik found Israfel in a very bad condition. The poor angel had been beaten severly and was wavering between life and death. He managed to survive and awoke a few weeks later. Unfortunately, he couldn't remember a single thing from before he was beaten. He couldn't even recall who had done it to him. Even his name was lost to him. Israfel was the name bestowed upon him by Trik and since then, the two have become good friends.
Name: Rem
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Alignment: ???
Powers:
AngerFire - Blasts of fire.
HappyHealing - Powerful group healing, does not discriminate between enemies and friends.
EnvyTrap - Green energy encircles foes or whoever he is envious of.
WaveOfDespair - Darkness flares out, hurting people's souls and making them despair.
Text Color: Italic Red
Personality: Rem is usually a good natured child, though his emotions are sometimes rather unpredictable.
Appearance: He is skinny with slightly jutting hip bones and golden tanned skin. His hair is blue black, the color of midnight. He has eyes the color of pure emerald. His clothing is a simple pair of dark denim jeans that are slightly baggy on his small frame, an oversized red tshirt with the sleeves coming unraveled, and a pair of comfortable sneakers.
Biography: Rem was nothing but a stray elemental... until he met Krei purely by a whim of fate. He never liked large crowds since his unstable emotions triggered his powers. But he is always calm and collected around Krei and the two are practically siamese twins connected at the hip.
Name: Dirge
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Alignment: Evil
Powers:
DarkCharge - Manipulates Darkness.
BecomeShadow - Fade into the shadows.
ForceChaos (Shadow) - All shadow moves.
ShadowStep - Fade into another's shadow.
ShadOrb - Shadow blast.
Ghost - Phase through walls.
Invisibility - Become invisible.
Text Color: Bold Red
Personality: Dirge is often very quiet and withdrawn, silently resigned.
Appearance: Dirge is tall and almost emaciated, with translucent skin like that of a ghost. Hair the color of a raven's feathers rests atop his head, spilling down into eyes that are the color of the core of a sapphire, dark and depthless. Dark smudges of black eyeliner shadow around those eyes. He wears a black hoodie over a dark blue tshirt, simple blue jeans, and a pair of black converse.
Biography: Dirge was nothing but a lost soul wandering through the world, until he ended up on Ragnarok's doorstep. He was taken in and given a place that he could sometimes refer to as his home, though it mostly felt like a prison. Somewhere deep in his heart, he knew that he was not meant for evil but the powers that lurked within him always seemed to convince him otherwise.
Israfel's Biography: Trik found Israfel in a very bad condition. The poor angel had been beaten severly and was wavering between life and death. He managed to survive and awoke a few weeks later. Unfortunately, he couldn't remember a single thing from before he was beaten. He couldn't even recall who had done it to him. Even his name was lost to him. Israfel was the name bestowed upon him by Trik and since then, the two have become good friends.
If you haven't guessed as much, I used to be Artemis around these parts.
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Prancing Mad
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If no one objects, I was planning on making CoO a trilogy like thing. I already have the endings for both 2 and the possible third, Im just wanting to keep this one going for awhile like CoO, because I like all the different plots everyone comes up with for their individual characters. And after CoO 3, we could start a whole new storyline or something.
Ideas? Opinions?
Ideas? Opinions?
Look at this signature. Isn't it the funniest and most hilarious signature you've ever seen?
I am the artist formerly known as Matrix Kirby.
I am the artist formerly known as Matrix Kirby.
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BionicleMandi121
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I guess that's fine.
And, uh, I'm not quite getting how Artemis thinks I should be making Louanne act to comfort Trik. She's not exactly a person who does what she thinks she should do. She thinks about it, hesitates, kinda screws around...until someone with authority tells her exactly what to do. Then she does it without a second thought. :/
In other words, she's like me. @.@
Anyway, the only thing she could've done was ask him what was wrong, stand around feeling awkward, and wondering if it would've been a better idea to have left him alone for a while.
And, uh, I'm not quite getting how Artemis thinks I should be making Louanne act to comfort Trik. She's not exactly a person who does what she thinks she should do. She thinks about it, hesitates, kinda screws around...until someone with authority tells her exactly what to do. Then she does it without a second thought. :/
In other words, she's like me. @.@
Anyway, the only thing she could've done was ask him what was wrong, stand around feeling awkward, and wondering if it would've been a better idea to have left him alone for a while.
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I decided to change Rem's appearance, personality, and profile up a bit, and I'm finally going to introduce him into the main RP. I haven't quite decided which side he'll truly be on, but for now, he's with Ragnarok's warriors.
Name: Rem
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Alignment: ???
Powers:
AngerFire - Blasts of fire.
HappyHealing - Powerful group healing, does not discriminate between enemies and friends.
EnvyTrap - Green energy encircles foes or whoever he is envious of.
WaveOfDespair - Darkness flares out, hurting people's souls and making them despair.
Text Color: Italic Red
Personality: Rem is delightfully insane, and thus his behavior and emotions are quite unpredictable.
Appearance: He is skinny with slightly jutting hip bones and golden tanned skin. His hair is blue black, the color of midnight. He has eyes the color of pure emerald. His clothing is a pair of dark denim "girl pants" with large holes ripped in both knees, a red shirt with severly ripped up sleeves, and a pair black leather combat boots.
Biography: Rem was a child who comfortably talked to his cereal every morning. His toys would patrol around his bed at night. Flowers would serenade him to nap in the warm summer sun. In short, he was never a very sane child. At the age of ten, he ran away from his home in the city and began living in the forest. Rem began this new life by filing his teeth into sharp fangs and filing his nails into claws. He grew familiar with nature and became an insane, feral child who was inticing as could be. But watch out, he does bite.
Name: Rem
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Alignment: ???
Powers:
AngerFire - Blasts of fire.
HappyHealing - Powerful group healing, does not discriminate between enemies and friends.
EnvyTrap - Green energy encircles foes or whoever he is envious of.
WaveOfDespair - Darkness flares out, hurting people's souls and making them despair.
Text Color: Italic Red
Personality: Rem is delightfully insane, and thus his behavior and emotions are quite unpredictable.
Appearance: He is skinny with slightly jutting hip bones and golden tanned skin. His hair is blue black, the color of midnight. He has eyes the color of pure emerald. His clothing is a pair of dark denim "girl pants" with large holes ripped in both knees, a red shirt with severly ripped up sleeves, and a pair black leather combat boots.
Biography: Rem was a child who comfortably talked to his cereal every morning. His toys would patrol around his bed at night. Flowers would serenade him to nap in the warm summer sun. In short, he was never a very sane child. At the age of ten, he ran away from his home in the city and began living in the forest. Rem began this new life by filing his teeth into sharp fangs and filing his nails into claws. He grew familiar with nature and became an insane, feral child who was inticing as could be. But watch out, he does bite.
If you haven't guessed as much, I used to be Artemis around these parts.
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Silver
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Auu... sorry, guys... I hadn't really been keeping up with this one... Shans's lack of posting was rather discouraging. I didn't forget about it, but... this does make it rather difficult to get caught up.
"Irregardless" and "Over exaggerated" are NEVER CORRECT EVER because they are redundant
Regardless means "without regard", and adding "ir" on the front actually makes it a double negative; exaggerate means "to overstate" so you're literally saying "over overstate."
Example: I can not exaggerate the importance of this fact enough, regardless of how often people ignore it.
Regardless means "without regard", and adding "ir" on the front actually makes it a double negative; exaggerate means "to overstate" so you're literally saying "over overstate."
Example: I can not exaggerate the importance of this fact enough, regardless of how often people ignore it.
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BionicleMandi121
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