Cheesey's Art
Cheesey's Art
I... tried making my own IPAs.
Last edited by Cheezdude on Thu Feb 12, 2009 7:40 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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hey silver, looks like you have a little compitition!
those are some good sprites cheesy. now try making a..... hold on, I think I have an idea. lets see who is better at making D/P sprites.
Cheezedude, could you please make a combination of the pidgy and starly evolution line? i.e. pidgy/starly, pidgiotto/staravia, you get the idea.
those are some good sprites cheesy. now try making a..... hold on, I think I have an idea. lets see who is better at making D/P sprites.
Cheezedude, could you please make a combination of the pidgy and starly evolution line? i.e. pidgy/starly, pidgiotto/staravia, you get the idea.
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I'm one step ahead of you, Gar.
Now, the following image is going to seem overly harsh, and overly large. Really, the mixes aren't too bad; I have seen much, much worse sprites in my time, and I know that you're a beginner. I mean, when I first started, my sprites looked like.. Shroothoot... compared to which these are pretty darn good. However, I've all but dissected the first stage and pointed out what needs fixing.
Now, keep in mind that I really hate to discourage spriters... but it does take practice to make sprites that look game-quality. I've been making sprites for well voer three years, so uh... well, I should probably know what I'm doing by now, shouldn't I? You'll only get better with time, so keep at it.
Now, the following image is going to seem overly harsh, and overly large. Really, the mixes aren't too bad; I have seen much, much worse sprites in my time, and I know that you're a beginner. I mean, when I first started, my sprites looked like.. Shroothoot... compared to which these are pretty darn good. However, I've all but dissected the first stage and pointed out what needs fixing.
Now, keep in mind that I really hate to discourage spriters... but it does take practice to make sprites that look game-quality. I've been making sprites for well voer three years, so uh... well, I should probably know what I'm doing by now, shouldn't I? You'll only get better with time, so keep at it.
"Irregardless" and "Over exaggerated" are NEVER CORRECT EVER because they are redundant
Regardless means "without regard", and adding "ir" on the front actually makes it a double negative; exaggerate means "to overstate" so you're literally saying "over overstate."
Example: I can not exaggerate the importance of this fact enough, regardless of how often people ignore it.
Regardless means "without regard", and adding "ir" on the front actually makes it a double negative; exaggerate means "to overstate" so you're literally saying "over overstate."
Example: I can not exaggerate the importance of this fact enough, regardless of how often people ignore it.
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Starapteot?Gardialvoir wrote: Cheezedude, could you please make a combination of the pidgy and starly evolution line? i.e. pidgy/starly, pidgiotto/staravia, you get the idea.
Pidgaptor?
Aside from the stupid name it looks like a good idea.
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You didn't critique mine like that.......
Weepitang - Gender: Male; Type: Grass, Steel; Abilities: Clear Body, Chlorophyll; Attacks: Take Down, Vine Whip, Psychic, Wrap. Level 17
............ - Gender: Male; Type: Fighting, Flying; Abilities: Guts, Inner Focus; Attacks: Leech Life, Leer, Low Kick, Revenge. Level 15
Sudonette - Gender: Male; Type: Rock, Ghost; Abilities: Insomnia, Rock Head; Attacks: Knock Off, Copycat,Rock throw, Curse. level 5
Metarion(SDC) - Gender: Male; Type: Grass, Metal; Abilities: Shield Dust, Sturdy; Attacks: Metal Claw, Tackle, Mud-Slap, Headbutt. Level 8
Shieldyu(SDC) - Gender: Male; Type: Water, Ground; Abilities: Sturdy, Natural Cure; Attacks: Tackle, Protect, Rapid Spin, take down. Level 5
Lola - Gender: Female; Type: Psychic, Flying; Abilities: Inner Focus, Synchronize; Attacks: Teleport, Leech Life, Leer
............ - Gender: Male; Type: Fighting, Flying; Abilities: Guts, Inner Focus; Attacks: Leech Life, Leer, Low Kick, Revenge. Level 15
Sudonette - Gender: Male; Type: Rock, Ghost; Abilities: Insomnia, Rock Head; Attacks: Knock Off, Copycat,Rock throw, Curse. level 5
Metarion(SDC) - Gender: Male; Type: Grass, Metal; Abilities: Shield Dust, Sturdy; Attacks: Metal Claw, Tackle, Mud-Slap, Headbutt. Level 8
Shieldyu(SDC) - Gender: Male; Type: Water, Ground; Abilities: Sturdy, Natural Cure; Attacks: Tackle, Protect, Rapid Spin, take down. Level 5
Lola - Gender: Female; Type: Psychic, Flying; Abilities: Inner Focus, Synchronize; Attacks: Teleport, Leech Life, Leer
Silver wrote:I love you The n00b. You don't have to be jealous of actual n00bs. There's only room in my heart for you. I'm just... disappointed that you left me for so long. It was lonely... you promised you'd write to me, but you never did... the months passed by, and I still thought of you every day, but you never called. I never got any letters from you.
So eventually, I started to lose faith... I thought you had been killed in that terrible, terrible war. Or maybe that you had forgotten about me. It's been so long, you probably found another girl over there... I never stopped loving you, but I didn't think you cared about me anymore, so welcoming you back just would have been too painful for me... I'm sorry. I'm glad you've come back home *sniff*
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It was saved as .JPG. If I enlarged it like that, it would've ended up embarrassing you because .JPG sprites really look awful zoomed it.Blastotoise wrote:You didn't critique mine like that.......
"Irregardless" and "Over exaggerated" are NEVER CORRECT EVER because they are redundant
Regardless means "without regard", and adding "ir" on the front actually makes it a double negative; exaggerate means "to overstate" so you're literally saying "over overstate."
Example: I can not exaggerate the importance of this fact enough, regardless of how often people ignore it.
Regardless means "without regard", and adding "ir" on the front actually makes it a double negative; exaggerate means "to overstate" so you're literally saying "over overstate."
Example: I can not exaggerate the importance of this fact enough, regardless of how often people ignore it.
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Dang you and your logic.... If i do it again, will you zoom in on it and point out its every flaw and tell me how i could better it just like you did cheesy's?Silver wrote:It was saved as .JPG. If I enlarged it like that, it would've ended up embarrassing you because .JPG sprites really look awful zoomed it.Blastotoise wrote:You didn't critique mine like that.......
Weepitang - Gender: Male; Type: Grass, Steel; Abilities: Clear Body, Chlorophyll; Attacks: Take Down, Vine Whip, Psychic, Wrap. Level 17
............ - Gender: Male; Type: Fighting, Flying; Abilities: Guts, Inner Focus; Attacks: Leech Life, Leer, Low Kick, Revenge. Level 15
Sudonette - Gender: Male; Type: Rock, Ghost; Abilities: Insomnia, Rock Head; Attacks: Knock Off, Copycat,Rock throw, Curse. level 5
Metarion(SDC) - Gender: Male; Type: Grass, Metal; Abilities: Shield Dust, Sturdy; Attacks: Metal Claw, Tackle, Mud-Slap, Headbutt. Level 8
Shieldyu(SDC) - Gender: Male; Type: Water, Ground; Abilities: Sturdy, Natural Cure; Attacks: Tackle, Protect, Rapid Spin, take down. Level 5
Lola - Gender: Female; Type: Psychic, Flying; Abilities: Inner Focus, Synchronize; Attacks: Teleport, Leech Life, Leer
............ - Gender: Male; Type: Fighting, Flying; Abilities: Guts, Inner Focus; Attacks: Leech Life, Leer, Low Kick, Revenge. Level 15
Sudonette - Gender: Male; Type: Rock, Ghost; Abilities: Insomnia, Rock Head; Attacks: Knock Off, Copycat,Rock throw, Curse. level 5
Metarion(SDC) - Gender: Male; Type: Grass, Metal; Abilities: Shield Dust, Sturdy; Attacks: Metal Claw, Tackle, Mud-Slap, Headbutt. Level 8
Shieldyu(SDC) - Gender: Male; Type: Water, Ground; Abilities: Sturdy, Natural Cure; Attacks: Tackle, Protect, Rapid Spin, take down. Level 5
Lola - Gender: Female; Type: Psychic, Flying; Abilities: Inner Focus, Synchronize; Attacks: Teleport, Leech Life, Leer
Silver wrote:I love you The n00b. You don't have to be jealous of actual n00bs. There's only room in my heart for you. I'm just... disappointed that you left me for so long. It was lonely... you promised you'd write to me, but you never did... the months passed by, and I still thought of you every day, but you never called. I never got any letters from you.
So eventually, I started to lose faith... I thought you had been killed in that terrible, terrible war. Or maybe that you had forgotten about me. It's been so long, you probably found another girl over there... I never stopped loving you, but I didn't think you cared about me anymore, so welcoming you back just would have been too painful for me... I'm sorry. I'm glad you've come back home *sniff*
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My new one was worse than the old one! I didn't spend nearly as much time on this though...
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No. Just no.
Weepitang - Gender: Male; Type: Grass, Steel; Abilities: Clear Body, Chlorophyll; Attacks: Take Down, Vine Whip, Psychic, Wrap. Level 17
............ - Gender: Male; Type: Fighting, Flying; Abilities: Guts, Inner Focus; Attacks: Leech Life, Leer, Low Kick, Revenge. Level 15
Sudonette - Gender: Male; Type: Rock, Ghost; Abilities: Insomnia, Rock Head; Attacks: Knock Off, Copycat,Rock throw, Curse. level 5
Metarion(SDC) - Gender: Male; Type: Grass, Metal; Abilities: Shield Dust, Sturdy; Attacks: Metal Claw, Tackle, Mud-Slap, Headbutt. Level 8
Shieldyu(SDC) - Gender: Male; Type: Water, Ground; Abilities: Sturdy, Natural Cure; Attacks: Tackle, Protect, Rapid Spin, take down. Level 5
Lola - Gender: Female; Type: Psychic, Flying; Abilities: Inner Focus, Synchronize; Attacks: Teleport, Leech Life, Leer
............ - Gender: Male; Type: Fighting, Flying; Abilities: Guts, Inner Focus; Attacks: Leech Life, Leer, Low Kick, Revenge. Level 15
Sudonette - Gender: Male; Type: Rock, Ghost; Abilities: Insomnia, Rock Head; Attacks: Knock Off, Copycat,Rock throw, Curse. level 5
Metarion(SDC) - Gender: Male; Type: Grass, Metal; Abilities: Shield Dust, Sturdy; Attacks: Metal Claw, Tackle, Mud-Slap, Headbutt. Level 8
Shieldyu(SDC) - Gender: Male; Type: Water, Ground; Abilities: Sturdy, Natural Cure; Attacks: Tackle, Protect, Rapid Spin, take down. Level 5
Lola - Gender: Female; Type: Psychic, Flying; Abilities: Inner Focus, Synchronize; Attacks: Teleport, Leech Life, Leer
Silver wrote:I love you The n00b. You don't have to be jealous of actual n00bs. There's only room in my heart for you. I'm just... disappointed that you left me for so long. It was lonely... you promised you'd write to me, but you never did... the months passed by, and I still thought of you every day, but you never called. I never got any letters from you.
So eventually, I started to lose faith... I thought you had been killed in that terrible, terrible war. Or maybe that you had forgotten about me. It's been so long, you probably found another girl over there... I never stopped loving you, but I didn't think you cared about me anymore, so welcoming you back just would have been too painful for me... I'm sorry. I'm glad you've come back home *sniff*
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With the tail of that creature, did you create your own colours instead of using the ones that already existed on the blue one?
I think maybe if you had also recoloured the ears it would have looked better... or even made the whole thing skitty pink!
(But that's just me... who listens to me anyhow ^^)
(And it still wouldn't have qualified for the olympics, but at least you would have had a better sprite.)
Do you use MS paint? Cuz I find it doesn't take TOO long to recolour if you know the nifty eraser trick I found out ^^
Ooo, and Silver can you look at my sprites too? Please? Tell me if they're worthy oh great Silver. You are awesome and such...
I think maybe if you had also recoloured the ears it would have looked better... or even made the whole thing skitty pink!
(But that's just me... who listens to me anyhow ^^)
(And it still wouldn't have qualified for the olympics, but at least you would have had a better sprite.)
Do you use MS paint? Cuz I find it doesn't take TOO long to recolour if you know the nifty eraser trick I found out ^^
Ooo, and Silver can you look at my sprites too? Please? Tell me if they're worthy oh great Silver. You are awesome and such...
AWESOME!
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On a different note, does anyone have any comments on the drawings I submitted for IPA apprentice?
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Computer Design project. =DScanned for your convenience!
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Neku from the world ends with you. It's face looks a bit... off, but I can't see why.
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