TSFTFT (Sprite Comic)

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Seph99
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TSFTFT (Sprite Comic)

Post by Seph99 »

I'm currently working on a pokémon sprite comic.

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Yeah, I know the cover isn't amazing. xD
Just something I made up randomly.

#1 Are we there yet?

#2 Ratta..tata?

#3 Dooomed!

#4 Should of, Could Of, Didn't...

#5 Pokéball, go!

#6 The Battle!

#7 Revenge!

#8 Flashback to Prof. Oak's Lab.

#9 Farewell Weedle!

#10 Fashion Reject

#11 Somehow.

#12 Recovery Time.

#13 Evil Plans.

#14 Surprise Attack?

#15 Team Rocket!

#16 "You guys are useless..."

#17 Kaaarp!

#18 Feelings.

#19 Team Rocket Is Blasting Off!

#20 Nightfall!

#21 Why?

That's all for now, I'm currently working on some more.
Sorry for the sloppiness of some of the comics...
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Post by Josiah »

So, what does TSFTFT stand for anyway?

Well, if the way the whole critique thing...
Graphics are mostly good although some of your effects like the sweat drops and fire could use a bit of work. Also some of the pokémon are way out of proportion compared to the humans (as in way too big). Using the pokédex pictures makes for good looking pokémon but leaves you with limited poses and they can be kinda hard to resize without distortion (not always but with some of them).
Not my favorite type of layout but it works fine although, if you ever start a website, having each strip a different size could by a bit of a pain.
Dialogue and story are fine. I wouldn't say they're amazing but it works and it's amusing at times.
Overall, not bad at all. Certainly better than a lot of the sprite comics out there.
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Post by shauni »

These are really funny, very well done and well scripted. If you can get a standard layout like Pebble Version so all the comics are the same size, you might want to think about getting a host and syndicating these comics. I get the impression they would be quite popular with pokemon fans.
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Post by Seph99 »

The Search For The Forbidden Temple (Yeah, it sucks)

Yeah, I was thinking about making a set size... But then I would have to make the scripts a precise size, and would have to edit out a ton of the stuff from the script not being able to put in some of the best parts...
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