Poems by me

Post by **shauni** » Thu Feb 17, 2005 3:02 pm

Thanks ^^ I wrote it this morning... it just came to me fully formed...its kinda weird

Post by **shauni** » Fri Feb 18, 2005 5:19 am

This is from the view of the man from the last poem
But she nodded....

I spyded her, running threw the flowered field
My eyes alight with shear joy
She stops, and looks at her arm
I, in all my boldness, run to her
But before I touch her gentle skin
My boldness fails, and I fall on my face

She turn around...but the grass covered me
Covered my shame
She scanned around and then returned to her arm
I yell to myself "Be a man!"
I stand up and touch her shoulder with my shaking arm
She turned at my gentle touch
Her eyes widen
"Its...its really you!" she yelled, true enjoyment at my sight
My heart begins to flutter as she whispered
"You..you came back for me"
"This is it!" I yelled to myself as I drew her close to me
Softly in an embrace
I slowly drew my face towards hers
I became aware of the moisture on her cheeks
The distance between our faces shrank
My arms begin to grip her hardly, tightly
My softness giving way to desire
I felt her breath drifting across my lips as she exhaled
A shaky, unsteady exhalation
It was this shaky breath that made me stop
"What...what are you doing...your hurting her!" I yelled at myself
I realised I could feel her body trembling in my embrace.
A shy, timid tremble, almost... scared

Scared
I had scared her
This was...what I had wanted for so long
Her kiss on my lips
But she was trembling softy in my arms, scared
I had scared her....
I stopped and pulled away
I would not scare her any more
I felt so angry at myself
I looked at her face
Her eyes trembling, tearful...like her body
"I'm sorry..." I spoke softly, and turned away
I was screaming at myself "You fool!"
"W-wait" a shy whispered followed from behind me
I turned, had she forgiven me?
I could only hope
"Yes..." I managed to force from my bond lips
Her eyes closed, her trembling continued
I sank...she was still shaking
"n-nothing...I'm sorry..."
In my head I was beating myself about "You fool! What have you done!"
"I should leave..." I added sadly, wanting to stop her fear
She nodded, I wanted to take her in my arms again
But she nodded....
I left
She still nodded
"What a fool I am..." I thought
I still left

Post by **shauni** » Fri Feb 18, 2005 6:02 am

The last part of the poems

I will not be a fool twice

I stood still nodding
"What are you doing!" I yelled at myself
His figure was growing smaller on the horizon
I stopped nodding and looked towards him
My senses awoke from the trembling
"You let him...leave"
I ran towards him as fast as my legs would carry me
He was walking slowly
I caught him up
"Wait!" I yelled, as loud as my lungs could bear

I turned toward the source of the voice.
It was a surprise to me to see her running towards me
"What are you doing?" I said coldly to my suprises,
"What are you doing!" I yelled at myself
For such a cold response to her cry
I stopped
She stopped
My hands shaking uncontrollably
She was still shaking...
"Can I ask you something?" she spoke, her voice broken with nerves
"Of course." He replayed, his voice broken with guilt
"I'd like... um..." She said
"Like what?" he said
"It's kinda hard to ask..." she spoke, starting to play nervously with her hair
She turned away,
He walked over to her
He cupped her face in his hands
Slowly turning her face
Until she was facing the same direction as he
She looked at him, her eyes wide
His eyebrows arched in curiosity
He looked at her, then blushed and looked away.
"Just ask." he said, now his voice nerves
"I... uh..." she tried again.
His cheeks reddened further
For a moment her eyes looked away
But they quickly snapped back to his face
A new determination behind her eyes
He took this signal as she still wavered in asking
"Oh, forget asking. You only live once." he spoke
With that
And with no other warning
He launched his face at hers
She barely had time to blink before his lips
Were pressed against hers in a kiss
His eyes closed as his arm held her against his
She flailed for a moment, wide-eyed,
but slowly, gradually, stopped resisting.
Her eyes closed,
Her arms wrapped themselves around him as
She returned his kiss.

The kiss ended
He pulled back a fraction of an inch,
She briefly tried to touch her lips to his once more.
She stopped, however, and for a time they sat together
Their warm breath washing over each other's face
Their nose sand foreheads touching
Their eyes closed
"I finally did it...." they both whispered, each hearing each other
They opened there eyes
Expecting concern on each others faces
But only found warm...and a smile

Post by **Neo Zanther** » Fri Feb 18, 2005 10:33 am

:-==== :-==== :-==== 8-0 8-0 8-0

What else can I say?

Post by **shauni** » Fri Feb 18, 2005 10:36 am

he he

Thanks Neo ^^

Post by **Chubby Grey Cat** » Fri Feb 18, 2005 12:45 pm

Nice. You have some good talent there. Keep it up :applaud:

Post by **shauni** » Fri Feb 18, 2005 12:51 pm

Thank you ^^

Post by **shauni** » Wed Mar 30, 2005 8:04 am

The withered rose

For when ones soul is sealed with a frosty heart, it may as well be stolen
An icy lock on bonded dreams as strong as cast iron
The rotting heart slowly dying,
As a withered rose cast on dry earth,
Thrown aside all that was once beautiful
As is shrinks into dust
Leaving black marks
And bitter tears
Eyes with a stony glare
Windows misted over
And bitter weeping
Hands as cold as snow
A glance as stern as silver
There back as they walk away
So slender and eerie
That last gaze, those foggy eyes
Love is lost in the stair
The lip twisted into an echo of a sigh
Walking away
Away
And bitter crying

Post by **Neo Zanther** » Wed Mar 30, 2005 10:35 am

not bad. Keep it up :)

Post by **shauni** » Wed Mar 30, 2005 11:32 am

Thanks, but it needs a little more work to make it relivent

Post by **Neo Zanther** » Wed Mar 30, 2005 11:34 am

That's why I said not bad. It does seem to need alittle work :)

Website · Post by **Shans** » Tue Apr 05, 2005 8:55 pm

Bravo :applaud: :applaud: :applaud: :applaud: :applaud: :applaud: :applaud: :applaud: