Warning -- Comic may contain strong language or sexual themes, mostly just the first one.
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ZOMBOCALYPSE
My serious look at Zombies.
COMIC IS IN EXTREMELY EARLY STAGES.
Comic takes place in 2008, present day, the main characters will be average Americans trying to get out of the zombie onslaught, better plot details coming soon.
Anyways, if you wish to join this comic, i need a character description including if they're a furry or wear armor or something how they'd appear in the human world.
Also, what clothes they would wear, it'd be nice if you'd provide a sprite sheet but it is not necessary.
Also, it's possible for you to die if you sign up.
There are three types of characters - Civilians, zombies and boss zombies.
Hyperion's Sprite Comics and other stuff
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Otaku + Shounen Jump characters + zombies = Yes.
The early strips really... weren't impressive at all, partially due to the lack of backgrounds, mostly due to the grammatical errors, but it's only improved from there (as comics tend to do). Although... it was kind of weird how it started out as "the Real World", then just suddenly started being about zombie overlords... meh, I can forgive that because of the Shounen Jump characters. On that note...
"The Don" = Don Patch?
Overall, though, you're doing a good job with it. I certainly hope to see more.
The early strips really... weren't impressive at all, partially due to the lack of backgrounds, mostly due to the grammatical errors, but it's only improved from there (as comics tend to do). Although... it was kind of weird how it started out as "the Real World", then just suddenly started being about zombie overlords... meh, I can forgive that because of the Shounen Jump characters. On that note...
"The Don" = Don Patch?
Overall, though, you're doing a good job with it. I certainly hope to see more.
"Irregardless" and "Over exaggerated" are NEVER CORRECT EVER because they are redundant
Regardless means "without regard", and adding "ir" on the front actually makes it a double negative; exaggerate means "to overstate" so you're literally saying "over overstate."
Example: I can not exaggerate the importance of this fact enough, regardless of how often people ignore it.
Regardless means "without regard", and adding "ir" on the front actually makes it a double negative; exaggerate means "to overstate" so you're literally saying "over overstate."
Example: I can not exaggerate the importance of this fact enough, regardless of how often people ignore it.
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No offense but I was ready to stop reading after about three strips, but Silver said it got better so I kept reading and yeah, it did improve a bit. I'm glad you droped the Real World thing pretty quickly. It was nice to see Bobobo (even if he didn't do much) and I admit that the thought of Light running out of ink mid Death Note is kinda funny, although it'd be even better if he got clobbered cause of it.
My main recommendation would be to slow things down a bit. Too much stuff is skipped or skimmed over plus scenes are changing nearly every other strip, makes it hard to follow.
My main recommendation would be to slow things down a bit. Too much stuff is skipped or skimmed over plus scenes are changing nearly every other strip, makes it hard to follow.
