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PostPosted: Wed Aug 06, 2008 11:40 am 
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Darn, that was bad luck. If i can't get more grammatical errors than Josiah, I lose!
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Uh, Josiah, that was already corrected.

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"... if Josiah gets the poisition"

Should the I be capitalized after the three dots?

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Silver wrote:
Then again in the resent D. Gray Man chapter, Cross was... or at least he certainly look... well, dead.


Then again in the resent D. Gray Man chapter, Cross was... or at least he certainly looked... well, dead.

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((You sure my name was already capitalized? Cause I did go through all the old posts to check...))

((Whether or not you capitalize after an ellipse depends on the context. Sometimes they need spaces too.))

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Then again in the recent D. Gray Man chapter


Then again, in the recent D. Gray Man chapter (comma added)

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Yeah, I already capitalized the J.

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Silver wrote:
I'm finally have way to having my very own mined slave!


I'm finally half way to having my very own mined slave!

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Silver wrote:
I'm finally have way to having my very own mined slave!


Mined should be mind.

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((Already corrected))

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Darn. Control F, how have you failed me?

Me and Josiah are tied. *gulp*

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Watch you guys suffer is what I live 4


Watching you guys suffer is what I live 4

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((that was already corrected as well. Would anyone mind if I post the paragraph with everyone's corrections in it?))

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Maybe Ill make the next challenge Stand Up Comedy accept that this is the Internet so I'd have no idia if you actually stood up or not.


Maybe Ill make the next challenge stand Up Comedy accept that this is the Internet so I'd have no idia if you actually stood up or not.
(I'm pretty sure that those three words arn't proper nouns)

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If that's right I'll go ahead and de-capitalize the U.

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((I have a similiar paragraph but if yours is right I seem to have missed a bit...))

Going off what they said:

comedy

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I was going to de-cap that, but I wasn't sure if it was necessary.

I also have 3 versions of the original paragraph: A copy of the original, a version with all mistakes bolded and the corrections in parenthesis (with the mistakes I corrected in green) and a version with all mistakes just corrected. The 2nd version used to have mistakes to be corrected in blue.

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