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OK! so how many chapters have you already writt? :suspicious: en

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2 more full chapters as well as the plot outline

Did you say Ramen? and Nihao Sayo!

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I have wirtten 2 more chapters as well as the ones already up, making 4 and the prolog

The next chapters are called 'Did you say Ramen?' and 'Nihao Sayo!'.

I have the plot outline written so I dont controdict myself, meaning I already know whats going to happen in each chapter, I just have to write them.

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<span style='font-size:14pt;line-height:100%'><span style='color:purple'>Chapter Three: Did you say Ramen?</span></span>

*I wonder why she's yelling at me*
The red headed girl turned around, anger written across her face, and a flicker of something else...embaricmnt?
"hay wait a mintue! Who are you calling a pervert"
"Pervert? I never called you a pervet...I dont even know you!"
"Just a second, you walked in on me!"
"What? What are you talking about...I've never even seen you before"
"O yea! My sentiments exactly, Goodbye"
"W-whats going on? Do you even hear what I'm saying?"
"Ranma, where are you going?" and older man spoke, he wore glasses and a gi
Sayo glanced at him, and another man that sat next to him. He had long hair and a mustachie. She flet a strange sensation, a flash of anger at seeing these two men, but she had no idea why
"whats...going on..."
"I'm going back to china. Theres gotta be a way to change back for good. Now is not the time for Fianc?s"
"China? Change back? Do you mean Jusenkyo?"
"By the way, I noticed you took a pretty good look at me to. I mean, its not big deal for me to see a naked girl, Ive seen myself plenty of times right?"
"What are you...talking about?"
"And I'm better built to boot"
"WHATS GOING ON?!?!"
She suddenly hand another serge of anger and picked up a table, trowing it at the girl
"what...what am I doing???"
Sayo suddenly burst awake from the futon.
"Ahh!" she screamed
She began to breath hevaly
"What...what in the world was that??? Who was that red headed girl?"
"O, your wake" a voice chimed from behind her, she tured and saw Kasumi walking into the family room with a bowl
"You eat this Noddle Soup ok. Akane made if for you herself. You need to get your strength back"
She smiled and placed the bowl next to Sayo on the floor
*Ramen Noddle soup*
"Thank you Kasumi"
"Your welcome"
Sayo sniffing the contents of the bowl
*Umm...this smells good...wait...'Akane' made if for me?*
Sayo looked over at Kasumi who was still smilling sweetly at her.
A horrible though entered Sayos head
"D-did...Akane come home already?"
Kasumi blinked twice at the question then smiled again
"Yes, Akane has been home for a while"
"Kasumi... thank you for your kindness...I aplogises for taking advantage of it...please...if you would just let me speack with Akane I will leave"
Kasumi looked at her blanky, and then smiled again
"My...arnt you a sweet little thing."
"What? You...dont mind? I mean, I look just like your sister...I even posed as her, but you dont mind?"
"Oh your poor thing. Sistuations like this one are more comman than not around here. I'm sure we can all take this in our stride"
*Wow... so this is normal*
"May I please speak with Akane?"
"Yes, she has been very eager to speak with you since yesterday"
"Yesterday? how long was I alseep?"
"Doctuer Tofu gave you some medican, he said it would make you sleepy"
"O yea...I forgot about that."
She did feel beter "I guess my fever is gone"
Sayo went to get up from the futon, but found she couldnt
She looked down to see her feet and legs which were bond with cloth
"What!?" she screaked in horror
"I'm sorry, but father insisted. He thought you might be hear to get revenge on Ranma or Akane"
"Did you say...Ramen?"
"No, Ranma. He is Akane's Fianc?"
"o...I guess I'm still thinking with my stomach..."
She glanced over at the Ramen
*an interigation before i can even have breakfast... great start to the day*
"Fianc?...he isnt cursed is he?""
"Why yes"
"Does he...turn into a red headed girl?"
"Why yes. So you do know him?"
"I dont think so...but I did...." she stopped
*better leave it there, its weird enought...I dont wanna tell her I dremept about Akane's Fianc?*
Before Kasumi could ask Sayo to finish her sentace, a familer figure walked into the room
Sayo looked at her, horrifed
It was Akane
*O no...I didnt want to meet her like this...I wanted to explain to her before she saw me in this body*
"I-I-I erm....ahehe"
Akane was looking at her, a supisius eyes glanced down over Sayo, then a nutral expresion retured.
"What are you doing here Kiema? Some trouble at mount phoneix?"
Sayo went white
"W-whoes Kiema?"
Akane walked towards her double, she was holding a Kendo training Sword
*I wonder what she inteds to do with that*
*gulp*
Akane leaded towards her double, there faces on level
"Enough games Kiema, your tricks wont work twice. Why are you hear?"
"Akane, dont be rude to our guest"
"She isnt a guest"
Sayo's mind was racing *I'm gunna die*
"Well...I was at Jusenkyo not long again...I..I fell in your spring by accident... I-I think the guide said it was called Akaneniichuan...h-he said that...."
Akane's face tured from suspicion to suprise
"You fell in Akaneniichuan? By acciendent?"
Sayo noded rappieldy
"Please...I'm only her to ask for your help...the Guide gave me your address...we figured youd be the best person to ask about this...being its you that nearly drowned there..."
Akane looked her up and down, she then turned to Kasumi
"Kasumi, can you boil some water up...I dont think this is Kiema after all..."
Kasumi noded and left the room.
Akane tured back to Sayo
"Ok, now its just me and...me I guess"
Sayo looked a little nervus, she tryed to lean away from Akane as best she could in her restrianed sistuation
"So, what SHOULD I call you?"
"S-Sayo Aketchi"
Akane leaned back a little, as if contemplating this rather unsual situation.
Sayo nervualy contuied
"Listen Akane...I'm really sorry about this...I was walking to your house with someone called Ryoga when I got wet"
"You where with Ryouga? How long where you wondering around?"
"About three days after I bumped into him at the train station, I relased now I was actualy only an hours walk from this Dojo"
Akanes smiled, making Sayo relax a little
"Well...when I got wet, um..."
Ryouga had told her that Akane didnt know about his curse, and he didnt want her to, he had not mentioned however that P-chan was Akanes pet
"Well...after I got wet, Ryoua and I got sperated...I some how ended up at some place called Ucchan's Okonomiyaki"
"Ukyous restarnt right?"
Sayo noded
"Well...I was wet and hungry, and completly lost. I went inside...I didnt even consider that some one would know you Akane....I started eating an Okonomiyaki while talking to Ukyo... not knowing she thought I was you"
"She...she asked me why I was acting so weird, and told me I didnt look well. When she offered to take me home I figured it was the only way I would ever find your Dojo. So..."
"You prented to be me"
Sayo bowed her head "Yes...I'm sorry...I inted to change back right away...I foolishy thought no one need ever know I was here...I would just talk to you and leave...but then your sisters forced me into a funton and called a Docture...I was coming down with a fevor...I've been wondering around, sleeping rought for a while...and spending alot of time dreched in cold water...he gave me some medican...I didnt realse it would put me out cold for so long..."
Sayo leanded even further forward in her bown
"I will understand if you dont want to help me revers this curse...just please forgive my foolishness..."
Akane was silent, she was conviced this person before her was someone she had just met
"I'm sorry Sayo, I should not have been rude to you. If I can help you I will...but lets get you changed back...talking to...myself is a little unsteleing"
Sayo noded and smiled orquadly
"Um...would you untie me...please"
"My father wants to talk to your first...just tell him what you told me and it shoulnt be a problem"
Sayo looked a little dishartedned at the remard,
*This is way to creepy...seeing all these weird expression on my own face...* Akane thought
Kasumi reutred with the hot water
Sayo leaned towards her, to indicate she was ready to receve it
Kasumi began to pour the water
It landed softly on Sayos head...she welcomed it
A few seconds passed and the steam evapared like mist, relveling Sayos true form.
Her long hair was unbound and flowed down her back, her ocean blue eyes slowly opened as the water cleared from her face. She looked up first at kasumi, who she had been facing. She was smiling at her as always
She then quickly glanced over at Akane who was already looking a little more comftable witn the situation.
"So, your Sayo Aktechi"
Akane smiled and placed a hand on Sayo's shoulder
"I'm Akane Tendo"
Sayo smiled back at her
A few moments of silence follwed when Kasumi suddenly stood up, ending the monet in which the two girls regard each other
"I had better get making breakfast"
Sayo glanced back over to her Ramen
"O...its getting cold..."
Akane picked up the bowl and chopsticks
"I cant untie you...but no one said I couldnt feed you"
She clasped some of the ramen on the end of the chop stick and moved the bowl and it to Sayo
Sayo looked at it for a moment, then back at Akane
"You...dont mind?"
Akane smiled "Of course not, your a guest"
Sayo noded and opened her mouth, excepting the food
Akane placed the Ramen in her mouth
"I made it myself"
Sayo closed her mouth around the chop sticks and pulled her head away
She sayver the taste for a moment, when a suddend shock of pain expoded in her mouth.
Her eyes burst open, the first thing she saw was Akane looking at her with hopeful eyes
"If...if you dont like it its ok...I'm used to people not liking my cooking"
Sayo's eyes where watering
*It tastes like feet!*
She closed her eyes and gathered her thoughs
*dont offened her...eat it*
As if pulling on all her resources she swalled the mass of Ramen.
After a moment of recovery she looked up at Akane
"Its...wonderful....urg"
Akane grew a huge grin on her face
"You really like it?! O i'm so happy! Here! Have some more!"
Sayo's eyes went wide with fear, she was about to scram when yet another new voice entered the room, it was a males.
"Dont eat that! You'll die!"
Both Sayo and Akane tured there heads to the sourse of th outburst.
Sayo servayed the person, a tall young man with black hair tied into a pig tail
*my hero! He's saved me from the evil ramen!*
"Ranma! My cooking isnt that bad!"
"Akane, its toxic!"
"Ranma? Thats Ranma? Hes your Fianc?s?"
Akane looked at Sayo who had genuine suprise on her face.
Akane began to blush while Ranma just walked over to them both.
"Yea, I'm her Fianc?s, not by choice though"
Akane's blush tured into blood red anger
"Like i'd want to marry you anyway!"
"Uncute tomboy"
"Pervert!"
"Your foods toxic!"
"Your a cross dresser!"
"Why dont you run off with Kuno!"
"Why dont YOU run off wih Kuno!"
Sayo sat and watched this little verbal match
*The red head in her dream WAS him...*
Sayo looked on, then horror came accorss her face again when Akane threw her Ramen at Ranma
"Here! Why dont you try some!"
"My Ramen!" she yelled, then remembered how it tasted. A sudden glow of satisfaction filled her as the bowl missed Ranma and smashed on the floor
"O no! Your Ramen!"
Ranma walked over to Sayo and placed his hand on her shoulder
"At least you didnt have to eat any more of Akanes poison Ramen, we wouldnt want to call Docture Tofu out twice in one week"
Akane tured around, she was fumming
"Ranma! She liked it you baka!"
"No she didnt! She was lying threw her teeth!"
"No she wasnt! You werent lying where you Sayo!"
Both of them looked at her, she almost shrank
*great....*
"um...well...thats to say...well....it was a little....that being I could...but then..."
Sayo was sweating, she wanted to run away, but she was still tied up
"Come now sister dear, lets not hurass our guest when we all know she was being polite about your cooking"
Sayo tured to see the short heared girl again, the one from last night
"Nabiki, this is none of your bunises"
"Akane, you know you cant cook"
"Ugh.....NABIKI!"
"Wow, carm down there Akane"
She swiftly tured to Ranma
"I wouldnt talk if I where you!"
Sayo felt very small and insignifcant at this point
*i'm beging to understand why Kasumi said this was normal....*
"E-Excuess me..." Sayo meeckly vocied
All three looked at Sayo
Akane tured in her rage
"What!?"
Sayo's own eyes narrowed
*battle aura...*
Her voice went sturn and she looked on at Akane with a cold stair.
"Weather or not I liked your Ramen is no longer an issue as its all over the floor...I apreciate you cooking it for me though"
Akane's face remained unreadable
Sayo closed her eyes
"And just for the recored, I DID like your Ramen"
Sayo heared a gasp, she opened her eyes.
Akane had knelt down and placed both her hands on Sayo's shoulders. Her eyes where spartling
"Y-you really DID like it...."
Sayo looked past Akane and noted the looks of doom which doned Ranma and Nabiki
She looked away
*O foo to them anyway, I only need Akane's help, and I dont inted to be hear long enough to try diner*
She suddenly heared squeeling
*Thats a pig...could it be Ryouga?*
Sayo looked towards the entrance of the room, inded Pig Ryouga stood at the door.
"P-chan!" exclaimed Akane "Where have you been?"
"P-chan?" asked Sayo
"You know, 'P' for Pig and 'chan' for cute"
"Off course..." added Sayo, making Ranma grin for a reason beyond her.
Akane left Sayo's side and picked up P-chan, giving him a little kiss on the snowt
"I missed you baby"
Sayo's eyes went wide
*Ryouga is Akanes...pet?? No wonder he didnt want me to tell her...o wait....thats means...*
Ranma walked over to Akane and P-chan and began to poke at the pig
"Where you end up this time, huh 'P-chan'. Always getting lost"
"Stop it Ranma, hes not Ryouga you know"
Sayo didnt know weather to panic or laugh.
She then notcied however the way Ranma was behaving, he was...mocking the pig for his sence of direction.
*Ranma must know...but he lets this happnen when Ryouga loves his intened...jeezs....I guess Ranma really IS a jerk*
"My father will be hear in a mintue Sayo. All you have to do is tell him what you told me and it will be fine"
Sayos was pulled out of her thought pattern
"Um...O yea...right"
She noded and planted herself back down in the futon
Nabiki walked over to Sayo
"I'll untie you now for 5000 yen"
*This is going to be a LONG day....*

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Hehehe (quickly) funny, I liked it :applaud:

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<span style='font-size:14pt;line-height:100%'><span style='color:purple'>Chapter Four: Nihao Sayo Part One</span></span>

"Hi Ya! Ranma! You come to date with shampoo!"
Shampoo glomped onto the male Ranma who was first in the Cat Cafe door.
Ranma and Akane had brought Sayo to the Cat Cafe in the hopes they could better help Sayo as none of them at the Dojo had had any suggestions
Sayo came up behind him as did Akane holding P-chan
"Who is you!" Shampoo yelled, pointing at Sayo
"No is other fianc?e! I kill you if is!"
"What?" asked a confused Sayo to Akane
"Dont ask....all the people from Joketsuzoku are crazy. Most be something in the water..."
Sayo was silent for a moment, then asked meekly "Shes from....Joketsuzoku? In China?"
"Yea, you heard of it?" asked Akane innocently
"You've been to China right, Ranma said it was right near Jusenkyo. Its why where hear, there elder owns this place. She might know another why to cure your curse, being how different its if from normal Jusenkyo curses."
"There.....elder..." Sayo's fists clenched into a tight grip, unseen since Jusenkyo
"Sayo?"
"All the years I've waited... and to find you here??. You Joketsuzoku Bimbo... YOU RUINED MY LIFE!"
Shampoo's jaw dropped.
"Uh... is you sure you no confuse Shampoo with girl-type Ranma?" she inquired.
"As though I could forget!" Sayo retored with a feral type snarl on her face.
"What gives?" asked a confused Ranma
"Shampoo have NO idea who crazy girl is!."
"Oh," said Ranma. "It's one of those."
"Hum?"
"Never mind."
Sayo prepared to hit Shampoo when she was stopped by a chain in front of his face.
"How dear you attack my Shampoo" yelled Mousse
"Shampoo is no yours Mousse!"
"ok! Ok...lets all calm down. Sayo, whats this all about anyway?"
Sayo glared at Shampoo. "Thanks to them ive seen hell!"
Ranma and P-chan felt a disturbing sense of deja vu.
"Its because of THEM this whole mess started..." Sayo continued.
"One moment please," said Ranma. He pulled a bottle of cold water out from his shirt and poured it over Sayo.
"Now is two Akanes...." whispered Shampoo
"WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING??!!! I'M ANGSTING HERE!!!"
Sayo Akane was outraged.
"Sorry, but theres something you should know."
He walked over to Shampoo and was about to pour the rest of the battle over her when he stopped
"Ranma" Shampoo spoke, and glomped onto him "You no turn Shampoo into cat NOW Ranma?"
"Ugh...I...I can't do it..."
Akane fumed
"Urg! You wimp! Listen Sayo, Shampoo has a Jusenkyo curse to. She turns into a cat, and that boy there, turns into a duck"
Sayo face flated and then her head shank into her shoulders, her battle area burning red
"I dont care! Why do you think I was at Jusenkyo in the first place?!"
Everyone now staired at Sayo
"You went to Jusenkyo because of Shampoo?"
"Indirectly yes"
"So your blaming her for your curse?" asked the withered Elder who now entered the restaurant
"Great Grandmother! Is true? Is curse Shampoo's fault?"
"No child, if anything its my fault"
Sayo looked around at the elder, then down as her sight found only air
"Its not the curse am angry about, I was just passing threw Jusenkyo to get home after YOU weren't at Joketsuzoku liked you promised you would be!"
Cologne sighed "Now I understand"
"That foul day...so long ago now, when Shampoo fell in Maoniichuan...it was my fault we where even there, we should have chosen another training ground for Shampoo to retrain...however, we where more dishearted by another problem, as are you I see"
"So you are Sayo Aketchi...I had wondered what had became of you...instead of my guidance you found Akaneniichuan. How tragic."
Akane was now fuming "And whats so terrible about turning in me!"
"You know her?" Mousse asked Ranma.
"I'm not Cologne Duck Boy" replied Ranma.
"Ten years ago a promise was made to a Martial Arts School right here in Japan by myself to honour a promise"
"What promise Great Grandmother?"
"There was once a Martial Artist by the name of Sakura, she travelled all over China to improve her martial arts. After many years of training she came to our Amazon Village to challenge our champion"
"So, an outsider challenged you...didnt she know about the Kiss of Death?" asked Ranma, the story sounding to much like his for comfort
"She did" replied Cologne "But she wasn't an outsider, her mother had been an Amazon of our very village who had left to follow one she had given the Kiss of Death to. A man she had married and raised a family with. It was an honour for the child to return to our village"
"I take it she won the fight"
"You are correct son-in-law. Sakura indeed defeated Shampoo's mother"
"What you say Great Grandmother? Sakura fight my Mother? And she lose!"
"Thats correct, the champion of our village had lost, and by rights, Sakura was now the Joketsuzoku champion...however"
Cologne walked into the room, past Sayo and jumped onto a table
"Sakura and her husband lived in Japan, Sakura had come alone to Joketsuzoku to secure something from us"
"Whats was that?"
"The right for her daughter to train with us when she came of age"
"I get it, ten years passed and the daughter showed up...so Sakura...."
"....Was my mother" Sayo finished
"There I was, I had come all the way to China after ten years of training....only to find the elder and her family mine were honour bond to had upped and left Joketsuzoku! They could only tell me they had gone to Japan"
"Ten years," Sayo muttered. "Ten years of my life training so I would be worthy enough to train with you! You abandoned me! Abandoned your promise!"
"So wait a sec... The old ghoul had sworn to your mother ten years ago to train you in China, but when Shampoo lost to me, she came with her to China and opened this place...so when you went to China...she was here" added Ranma as he peaced together all the information
"So why you mad at Shampoo crazy girl! Is between you and great Grandmother!"
"Think about it, she's here because you didnt kill or marry Ranma. So, indirectly, it is your fault." suggested Akane.
Sayo suddenly went white "Kill or marry Ranma....?"
Sayo suck her head of the though "Urg! Thats not the point! How could you forget me? ME? Sayo Aketchi! Because of you, you scruffy Old woman, my entire social standing was destroyed. My family has sworn to disown if I dont give you the Kiss of Death!"
Cologne began to laugh
"Your 100 years from beating me child"
Sayo reddened. "How DARE you!!!"
"Who are YOU to talk to me about HONOUR child?" Cologne added
"As an Amazon by blood you should know that the Kiss of Death comes before any other promises, which include yours. Besides, we never promised WHEN we would train you, just that we would"
Sayo's face was so red with anger it was almost purple "Why you slippery little..."
"Hay! I have an idea! Why dont you train her now!" added Mousse, who was quickly clobbered by Shampoo
Cologne smiled as she watched the boy land on the floor "For once he may have a good idea"
"Really?" added Shampoo in suprise
"I will take her as my student as promised to her mother. And I will see if we cant find a cure for your little curse"
"But Great Grandmother! What about Ranma! Shampoo can no leave now!"
Cologne smiled "We wont leave Shampoo, we will train Sayo here, in Japan"

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Me like! That all me say :applaud: :applaud:

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<span style='color:purple'><span style='font-size:14pt;line-height:100%'>Chapter Four: Nihao Sayo Part 2</span></span>

Sayo was sat down on a seat inside the Cat Cafe, a bowel of hot Ramen infront of her, but her appetite was lost
She was damp, Akane and miserable.
She poked at the Ramen with a chop stick in a day dream while everyone around her ate.
Akane watched her sadly pocking at the ramen, it was so normal to see that look on her own face...yet so alien to see if from across a dinning table.
"So child, you will except my offer to train you here?" asked the withered elder who had just joined them at the table
Sayo didn't not reply, she glanced up at Colance, and retured to pocking her ramen.
"Is great honour to be shown techniques of Amazon tribe, why Sayo look like world is ending? Should be happy, no misrable like Akane"
Akane just glared at Shampoo
Sayo again glanced up, this time at Shampoo
She felt rage flicker within her but she was to depressed to do anything to the bimbo before her, her gaze met Akane, she saw the look across her face, her adopted face...
Colone's eyes narrowed as she watched Sayo, there was more to her story than she was letting on...
All three where sizing each other up, Ranma was to busy stuffing his face to notice.
Ranma finshed his ramen and slamed the bowel to the table with a satisifed grin on his face
"That was great!"
Shampoo glomped onto him again
"You like! Shampoo to to happy!"
Sayo watched the display of Ramna trying to free himself from the steely grip of the amazon woman. She felt a slight grin come on but it faded quickly when she saw Akane stand up with a glass of water.
"No! No wait Akane! Its not what it looks lik..."
She dumped the water over both of them
"Lets she you hug now!"
Suddenly Ranma-chan stood screaming with tears in her eyes with a purple cat on her head
"c-c-c-cat!!!!!!!!!!!!" she yelled as she ran around the ramen shop
"g-g-g-g-g-g-get it offffa me!"
Both the figures come to a rest in the far wall of the resturant
Sayo's eyebrow raised
"Hes scared of cats?"
Akane did her usual 'hump' and retured to her seat
"Guess that showed him"
Sayo looked at her, then her eyes went wide
"You knew that would happen? And you did it anyway...that was so mean!"
Akane's eyes opened quickly, first in a glare, then when she looked on to her own face looking at her digusted and shocked, hers pulled into suprise
"What?"
"That was mean what you just did to Rana, I thought you where supposed to be engaged!"
"Well he shouldnt have been all over Shampoo!!"
"But he wasnt! That bimbo clamped onto him, he was TRYING to get her of"
Akane threw the parms of her hands down onto the table
"BAKA! You dont know anything about us! You only got her yesterday! It was our parents idea! not ours"
Sayo suddenly become red with anger and anguish
"I know more about you than anyone sitting in this room" she finshed, copying Akane's posture and tone of voice
Akane's face first went white then red
"W-What do you mean?"
Sayo leaned back into her chair and closed her eyes, her face now solum
"Thanks for the Ramen Granny, and I've decided I will take your traning"
She stood up, bowned slightly, then headed for the door
She stopped for a moment and look at Ranma-chan and Shampoo who had remainded unmoved from when Ranma-chan had ran into it.
Sayo pealled Shampoo of Ranma, who hissed at her
"You dont scare me you Dittsy Little Tart"
She threw the cat towards the others, then glanced at Ranma-chan who was twitiching a little
She tured and walked out of the Cat Cafe... her arms forming into fists
Akane watched her walk out of the door, she was no longer angry, just confused.
Colone picked up Shampoo and looked up at Akane
"The true fury of Akaneniichuan..."
Akane looked down at the elder
"What do you mean?"
"I mean it would appere Sayo has some of your memories..."
Akane's eyes went even wider than they already where
"She...she what??"
Colone closed her eyes "There are only a few springs at Jusankio that change a person mentaly as well as phsyicaly...I only know of Fuushanniichuan and Shannannichuan myself...."
"Drowned Priest and Virtuous Man?" added Mousee who had stopped cleaning to join the conversation he had been ear wiging for a few minitues
"Your right..I rember what Kinnii was like in his two forms...a killer and a saint..."
Colone began to noded
"Yes, Akaneniichuan transforms a person into you Akane, I suspect it wont be long before she ends up like Kinnii...thinking she really IS Akane Tendo when in cursed form...so far she doesnt seem so bad...defending Son-in-law before just proves it...she isnt like you yet..she is kind to him"
The cat noded in agreement
Akane frowed "Jee thanks"
"You had better go after her Akane, what if she runs into another of your aquantises on her own"
Akane's mind began to boggle...
*What if she rans into...Kuno!!*
She began to run out of the door, grabbing Ranma-chan by the pig tail
"Come on Ranma! SAYO! Wait up!"

Sayo was already out of sight from the Cat Cafe, she had wondered of, not really knowing the area, and was soon lost...but it didnt matter right now...
She walked aimlessly for about half an hour, thinking about her life and everthing that had happned to her, and what the future could hold for her now.
It began to rain.
She stopped after a while when she had found herself at a large park.
She looked around.
"I wonder where I am..."
She spotted some swings and walked over to them, sitting on them.
She was sobbing wet, tears diluted by rain water.
"O mother..."
She placed her heads in her hands and began to weep so loudly and heavly
"Mother why is this happening to me? Where are you!"
A figure stood watching the girl crying on the swing
*Isnt that Akane? I've never seen her cry like that before...I wonder whast goin on*
The figure began to walk forward Sayo...


<span style='font-size:14pt;line-height:100%'><span style='color:purple'>Chapter Five: Cast into China Part One</span></span>

Ukyo Kuonji watched who she thought was Akane Tendo, the macho tomboy fianc?e of her Ranma hunny, crying her eyes out...
"Akane...are you ok?"
Sayo-Akane turned and looked up at Ukyo, concern was written all over her face, as it was yesterday when she had insisted she take her home
"O...Ukyo"
Ukyo held an umbrella in one hand and a delivery of Okonomiyaki for Ranma in the other.
She lent the umbrella over Sayo-Akane and herself
"Whats the matter Akane, if you stay out in this rain you'll get sick again"
Sayo looked away from Ukyo and sighed "Ukyo, I'm not Akane, I guess no one at the House had a chance to tell you"
Ukyo tiled her head a little in confusion
"So you where not Akane after all...I did have a feeling....I thought you where acting a little weird yesterday...and know your..."
She stopped, adding mentaly *crying*
Sayo closed her eyes and stood up from the swing
"Who are you then?" asked Ukyo, her voice not changing tone, it was still worry there
"I'm a no body...and I shouldn't be here..."
She began to walk away from Ukyo, the rain hitting her again from the safety of Ukyo's umbrella
Ukyo watched this girl that looked so much like Akane walking of, it reminded her of when Konatsu was being dragged away by his sisters.
Her heart retched
"Wait!" she yelled after Sayo
Sayo stopped walking, for a few moments she didn't not move, then she turned her head to see Ukyo running towards her
"where...where are you going?"
The umbrella was placed over both of them again
"Sayo looked up at the umbrella and then at Ukyo
"I dont know...I cant really go back to the Tendos...and the Cat Cafe is out of the question...all my stuff is still back at the dojo so I cant even camp out..."
Sayo began to cry again, leaning onto Ukyo instinctively as she burst into tears
"I wish I had gone home! What kind of a stupied curse is this anyway! Why did I have to go to china!"
Ukyo's eyes fell soft on this sight, she didnt understand what was going on, but it was clear this person was hurting about something terrible
"Come with me, you can stay with me and Konastsu tonight"
She place the Okonomiyaki box under her arm with the umbrella and stretched out her spare hand
"I'm Ukyo Kuonji, what should I call you?"
Sayo looked at her hand, then she took it in a hand shake
"Sayo Aketchi"
"So, do you want to tell me why you look just like Akane Tendo?"
"Its a long story..."
"Come on, lets get out of the rain"
Ukyo still had hold of Sayos hand as she led her to her restaurant

The rest of the chapter is coming soon.....

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